Reviews for The Quest for the Golden Girdle
YokaiAngel chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
Way to go Age~ love the story don't stop writing!
SereHime chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
What the hell XD!

Iolaus is an idiot. Even if Deianeria gave Age her girdle and Age gave it to him, it would have been for Age NOT him! It would have been a token of her affection for Age not him, never him.
do not ask chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
ok i realy want to see wier this gose it is kind of cute how clules age is and it is kind of funny so please post more
ALCsisMTY chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
Hahahahahaha Iolaus was totally cute. ¿Para qué haría esa tontería? It was really hard for me to remember his name, its too difficult. Please write more fics of Heroic Age. Itd be better if it is IolausxAge, but its ok. I really liked your story.
Sunder the Gold chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
The formatting needs to be cleaned up, but overall this is hilariously good.

It's an utterly appropriate tribute to Hercules' apocryphal "Thirteenth Labor". The story in which a king invited Herakles to sleep with all of his dozen daughters in one night. The story goes that not only did Herakles succeed, he managed to get all of the daughters pregnant.

Of course, Age is a bit more chaste and childish than Herakles, which is why this innocent and silly story is utterly appropriate.
Jimm chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
Paragraph breaks are messed up in this. But I was still highly amused. :-)

Thanks for sharing this with us.
PassionIsLove chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
This is such a cute/funny fic. :D Big Grin.

I loved the plot of this, and the way they made Age think he had to do something. haha..

I wish that would would please continue. :D

(Note: You should space more throughout to make it easier to read. That's all. )

Loved it!
Pensive Rumination Observer chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Absolute freakin genius. The spacing could be better, but other than thats its downright hilarious. If you can please write more for Heroic Age, its got to be one of the coolest animes ever. Don't really care if its a continuation of this or a new fic but PLEASE write more! You certainly have a flair for stories!

Lookin forward to your next post!
ally chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
girl:

i love you

-Boy:

yeah i know everyone does!

-Girl:

really?

-Boy:

yeah... everyone of my friends that

are girls tell me that everyday

-Girl:

oh... but am i only your friend?

-Boy:

no... youre my girlfriend... why?

-Girl:

so when i say i love you i really do

mean it

-Boy:

yeah i know you do mean it... its just

that you dont need to tell me that you

love me anymore cuz i know you love me

since the day we been together and i

love you more each and everyday.

-Girl:

...

-Boy:

so wanna go somewhere tonight for our

7th anni?

-Girl:

yeah... where?

-Boy:

i dont know... maybe movie then dinner?

-Girl:

ok

-Boy:

ill pick you up after i get off and

get ready ok?

-Girl:

ok. what time do you get off?

-Boy:

in 2 hours and then i gotta go home

and yeah get ready which takes about

15-20 mintues...

-Girl:

aye... i thought you didnt have work

today...

-Boy:

one of my co-workers called in sick

-Girl:

oh okay! so ill see you around 7:30

then?

-Boy:

yeah! and babe?

-Girl:

yeah?

-Boy:

i love you

-Girl:

i love you too!

-Boy:

ok my manager is like looking at me so

yeah... i gotta go.

-Girl:

ok bye

-Boy:

bye

*

2 hours later...

the guy drives to his girlfriends

house and walks up to the door and

rings bell

-Girl:

hey! (gives a kiss to her boyfriend)

-Boy:

wassup... you ready?

-Girl:

um... wait... let me get my bag and we

can go ok?

-Boy:

ok

they both watched a movie and ate

dinner... once they were done eating

they head back to the car but before

she got into the car...

-Boy:

wait! can i blind fold you?

-Girl:

why?

-Boy:

its a suprise

-Girl:

what kind of suprise?

-Boy:

a big one

-Girl:

okay but only if you promise me that

you will hold my hand while we're

driving.

-Boy:

i promise.

-Girl:

ok blind fold me...

so they drove off... and then

they stoped.

-Boy:

ok we're here!

-Girl:

where?

-Boy:

wait let me walk you to the place!

-Girl:

what place?

-Boy:

somewhere! (and gives a kiss to her on

the lips)

-Girl:

babe!...

the boy walks her to the place

-Boy:

ok... let me take the blind fold off

-Girl:

where are we?

he takes it off her and she opens her

eyes and sees the view of the city and

at that same spot... thats where he

first asked her to be his

Girlfriend...

-Girl:

omg... (tears come down)

-Boy:

why are you crying?

-Girl:

this is where you first asked me out...

-Boy:

what are you doing the rest of your

life? (he asked on his knees and after

he says that...behind him... in the

air it says "will you marry me?" in

firworks)

-Girl:

(tears come down faster)

-Boy:

i wasnt at work when you called me...

i was planning this whole thing!

-Girl:

get up!

-Boy:

yeah?

-Girl:

(kisses him)

-Boy:

is that a yes or a no?

-Girl:

yes

If you don't repost this you will have

the loneliest life!

BUT!

If you do repost this you will have a

relationship that will last forever!

you have 3 min. to repost this

IF YOUR A GIRL REPOST AS THE SWEETEST

BOY EVER

AND IF YOUR A GUY REPOST THIS AS I

WOULD DO THIS FOR MY GIRL
Jax9 chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
Funny!
Spikesagitta chapter 1 . 9/17/2007
OMG! this is freaking hilarious! lol good one!
pokeball chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
This reminds me of Carrie's Fisher interview where she says George Lucas teaches them that "you don't wear underwear in space" when filming A New Hope. LOL!
Keira chapter 1 . 9/15/2007
can you imagine ANYTHING frilly underneath the clothes she wears? if rhe anime were realistic enough i bet you would see just normail seam ines anyway lol
Squall Gainsborough chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
I requested for a Heroic Age category and I got an email from FFN today saying:

Category added. Please login to submit an entry.

I haven't written a Heroic Age story myself but you could transfer yours to the proper category if you want. :)
dragonites chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
HAHAHAHAHAHA!
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