Reviews for Home is left behind
Isis the Sphinx chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Not bad. I can see why you wrote this to get a handle on writing Doctor Who. There was a hint of the Oncoming Storm in this, you did it well. The Doctor has a bit of reckless abandon in each of his regenerations.

Nicely done. Keep writing!
FORD B chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
A very nice and more importantly, informative story. I realyl wish I could have seent he first two Doctor Who's, but it doesn't look possible. I only know about John Pertwee and everything after. Thanks for the info at the end, it explains why he's called Doctor Who.
Bubbahotek chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
I didn't know that the Doctor was banished. I knew he was on the run from the Time Lords for the first two regenerations. I guess that does explain the lack of a name, unlike Chancellor Flavian or

Now Susan I can't remember if she fell in love and stayed on earth or if she fell in love and returned to Gallifrey.

You have an intersting story started for the Hartnell era. At least it's not another Doctor and Rose in love story.

Keep writing