|Reviews for ViktorBall|
| ANGSWIN chapter 1 . 12/1/2017
Oooh! What a neat take on the situation! :)
| Cat Feral chapter 1 . 7/31/2016
FYI, I'm pretty sure a "sot" is a drunk. Other than that, I really enjoyed this! I like how both boys are wondering where their attraction for the same girl - whom neither of them have had any success with - puts them in relation to each other!
I like the "football announcements" too! Good story!
| neville fan chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
"tooth shrunk" XD lol cute fic
| tenoh27 chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
A lovely story! I love Neville/Hermione (absolutely detest Ron/Hermione though), so it is always a happy day to be able to read a well-written piece such as yours. Thanks so much!
| Samiaow chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
This is really well written. I'm not normally a fan of Neville/Hermione but I do like the way these two friends connected in this scene. I can actually see this fitting in with the events in the book. It's funny but quite sad at the same time.
Only one, tiny criticism- you need to put punctuation at the end of every speech. Other than that, it's very good.
I especially liked the fact that Ron and Neville appreciate Hermione for being Hermione, rather than the Mary-Sue that she was made to be at the Yule Ball.
| Matt Quinn chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
MQ59, checking in.
I rather like the concept-both of the guys turned down by Hermione play ball with the Viktor Krum action figure.
| Madame Wilhelmina chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
I loved it. I'm a big fan of Ron/Hermione and I have very recently gotten into Neville/Hermione so this was perfect. I laughed all the way through this.
| beware of trips chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
This was quite cute. Poor Neville and Ron.