Reviews for Beginning's End
Dramionedreamer chapter 11 . 1/1/2013
Can you do another one? Like 6 years later? These are amazing!
voldyismyfather chapter 11 . 8/24/2010
oo its good :D
Princ3ssTabz chapter 11 . 1/19/2010
Heyy...I Luved Yuur Story...It Was Really Good And Very Funi...Please Keep Writing More Awesome Dramoine Fanfics...Hehehe...

Yuurz Truly,

Princ3ssTab x
Lily Harry's mum chapter 11 . 6/2/2009
It was ok
NewAgeGrave chapter 6 . 12/3/2008
This entire chapter is just really trivial, and you use way too much direct speech for your characters to express any true emotion. I liked this a bit in the beginning, but its just kind of lackluster.

This is a pet peeve of mine also; but it wasn't necessary to add random OCs who had nothing to do with the plot. JKR has many filler characters that would be more credible, rather than adding pointless crap it would make it more realisitic to add one of those.

The main point is that you just need to be more reflective in your writing, as talking gets real boring, real fast. Don't insult the original characters with giving them face-value personalities.
MyLookOfDenial chapter 11 . 11/9/2008
Aww bless.

It was really cute.

:D

X
Extacy925 chapter 11 . 1/15/2008
THAT WAZZ SO CUTE LUVED IT!
Kwebbeltje chapter 11 . 12/11/2007
lovely story!
Damonluv12 chapter 11 . 9/3/2007
Very good story! I liked the ending is there going to be a sequel? I liked when the story got heavy in just the right spots. Good job!
sherrithewriter chapter 11 . 9/1/2007
Great story. Loved it.
M.E.Potter chapter 11 . 8/24/2007
beautiful i hate travis but hermione and draco belong but forreal like in the real harry potter world i cant see them together can u
SeasonVelvet chapter 3 . 8/18/2007
“Well, that’s it really. Oh Minerva, pull yourself together. Did you remember the rings?”

“Yes I did. Here. Hush up Albus; I can’t help it if I cry at weddings. Especially for these two. It’s just so beautiful.” She sniffed.

As much as I dislike the plot, that was still funny.
SeasonVelvet chapter 2 . 8/18/2007
Ah, jeese. Another freedomless Dramione fic. Please, spare me.

This is so off base it's repulsive.

And they agree? What the fuck is that?

POD PEOPLE ARE TAKING OVER THE EARTH!
Mel's Merleawe chapter 11 . 8/17/2007
nice...
Mel's Merleawe chapter 7 . 8/17/2007
isn't tht way too fast...

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