Reviews for Coming of Age
jj chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
yikes
Nelicquele79 chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
Very well written. The way you detail and describe, it's amazing.
cara9001 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
That's really sad, I love it!
Alexxis T. Swan chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
No wonder Vegeta turned out the way he did. I'll never blame for acting cold and selfish to his son (Trunks) and Goku. Great job though I hate yaoi.
Amid Much Hysteria chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
bravo! i say, bravo!

Very well written and you've given Frieza a strange, more rounded, character here that's really refreshing )

great job!
MrsPiccolosWife chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
Oh My GOD. That was such an amazing story. I haven't read a longer one-shot like this in a while, since I've been having a rather short attention span lately. However, with this, I didn't even notice its length. I was so involved in the story; all I wanted to do was to keep reading! You write very, very well, and your fic has the perfect amount of description. The premise is a unique and creative take on exactly what happened to Vegeta when he was stuck with Frieza. I just loved it so much!

As much as I loved this fic, there a a few very minor things I would like to point out. Towards the beginning, you used parentheses to clarify a couple of things. I don't really think that you needed them. There were also a few spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes, but they weren't anything major enough to throw me out of the story. I don't blame you for missing a few little typos in a one-chapter story that's this long!

I'm sorry for the massive review, but I REALLY loved this fic. I'm going to read "Just to Sleep" now, and this is added to my favorites. Keep writing, because you're fantastic!
GabZ chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
WOw I simply loved it!
Warrior from beyond chapter 1 . 9/6/2007
that was very well written. leaves you wanting more
chichidark chapter 1 . 6/29/2007
Great fic! I liked your imagery. I enjoy it when an author creates the world they want the character to inhabit. I could almost see the light coming from Frieza's chambers...I'd like to see more!
Musette Fujiwara chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
wow...

awesome...

KInd of weird... but I liked it...