|Reviews for A Twisted Timeline|
| moosejuice5 chapter 25 . 2/26
quite good, funny at times
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 7 . 2/25
and you just ruined it for me... why in the name of kami did you have to add Hermione?
| GenetiX23 chapter 21 . 1/19
Oh come on.
| GenetiX23 chapter 17 . 1/18
Bahahahaha I love the sorting mishaps.
| GenetiX23 chapter 15 . 1/18
Eh, gender change for canon characters is sort of dumb, but at least it was with the incredible gender confused slytherin of fanfic lore.
I'm not holing this one against ya.
| GenetiX23 chapter 8 . 1/18
I still liked the "transfigure a squirrel's bones to look like Tom Riddle Sr.'s" method of ruining the ritual better than just destroying them.
| GenetiX23 chapter 3 . 1/17
Oh boy, Luna!
| GenetiX23 chapter 2 . 1/17
I know you hate this story, but I love any and all "Harry messes up the wizarding world" stories. So I wanted to say that, at this early stage, I'm enjoying the story.
Especially the 3 different factions that want Harry.
| Light Lord Cybergate chapter 18 . 1/17
No sympathy for Harry...he chose revenge when he should have chosen cunningness.
This would not have happened had he nite gone alone and planned ahead.
No good ever comes out of revenge.
Maybe this will teach him a very valuable lesson...bloody stupid gryffindor.
| Byakugan789 chapter 20 . 1/13
No offense, I love your story, it's highly original and deeply entertaining, But I'd have gone all competent Lockhart on the death eaters, especially the useful ones. There's no mentioned counter to the spell beyond the cruciatus, it's not blockable by any mentioned spell, though physical barriers and simply dodging would work, and not only is the body still usable for any number of things, but the four most powerful characters in JKR's HP series are halfbloods of ancient pureblood lines and most of the Death Eaters are whats left of the powerful purebloods. Imagine how much good they could do for the power and numbers in magical england if you didn't have to deal with their pesky psychoses?
| Byakugan789 chapter 9 . 1/9
Madam Zabini. Poor Blaise.
| Guest chapter 25 . 1/7
you have officially made it onto my most hated authors list. You have written a story that could have great, then you fucked it all up with the last 5 chapters, kill yourself
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/7
| WRoosterdf chapter 26 . 12/28/2013
Too bad the wand at the beginning wasn't used for anything, and I don't agree with Harry not trying to interfere with Luna's mom but it makes sense after it becomes clear he's a cynic. Also some sentences have mistakes, but it's possible to guess what was ment to be written.
| Hoshi124 chapter 3 . 12/5/2013
The mob shit is stupid.