Reviews for A Twisted Timeline
Outofthisworldgal chapter 21 . 3/1/2013
" if you do anything to Luna, you'll have to answer to me and my little friend." Got to get in those Mob lines but it not a gun but Vinny lol thats awesome.
Wow each chapter get better and better
Outofthisworldgal chapter 20 . 3/1/2013
You have a very disturbed and awesome mind when it comes to deaths. You have me laughing in many spots especially the end with Bella even if it was a cliffhanger (no pun intended lol) that was the best cliffhanger imaginable litterally :P LMFAO ROFL
Outofthisworldgal chapter 17 . 2/28/2013
"Sir, wants Dobby to screw him?" inquired Dobby that made my day or night since it is 10:45pm.
blackbloodywolf chapter 20 . 2/28/2013
kingstonavery chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
love it!
AvidReader chapter 3 . 1/29/2013
Poor grammar, badly written sentences, misspelt words...

Goodness, this is like reading Twilight all over again! With a dash of goofiness, of course.
Mari Wollsch chapter 26 . 12/30/2012
oke xxx
Guest chapter 20 . 12/30/2012
It's been a while since I've last seen such a crude cliffhanger. And despite how forced it felt, it was pretty refreshing. Use of a beta would be appreciated for some parts though.
Jonuts chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
"Yes, Mr. Fondlemember,"

Wow. Just...Wow. I'm really not sure I WANT to know how he earned that name.
AntarcticaLovesPenguins chapter 14 . 12/9/2012
OH SHIT HARRY DID NOT JUST XD I love this so hard
AntarcticaLovesPenguins chapter 4 . 12/9/2012
AntarcticaLovesPenguins chapter 3 . 12/9/2012
And... Everytime i read the word "Antonio" i think of Spain from Hetalia xD
Su.Lecue chapter 6 . 11/24/2012
That is what - thought! It gotta be Hermione haha! How would they get alone! Tipical good cause she is so mature, while I debout it with Ron!
SHJE chapter 18 . 11/22/2012
Poor dobby always sounding like he wants to rape people
SHJE chapter 16 . 11/22/2012
Harry can still save Luna's mom because it said she died when Luna was 9 and Luna's a year younger and considering Harry's current age he could save her
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