Reviews for A Twisted Timeline
Lady Beaumort chapter 3 . 12/23/2014
OK. Mobsters? A six year old Harry running the organization? Seems a little far fetched to me...
BarbedCaress chapter 2 . 12/17/2014
Ok, I love time-line fics.
And this one was going along well enough...
UNTIL...
the mob angle.
Will try one more chapter, but with that issue I am pretty sure you lost me.
On a positive note, I did enjoy the way you wrote Crabbe and Goyle. Funny!
7.4kHP Centaur Warrior chapter 1 . 12/16/2014
ROFL, Mr. Fondlemember, you are simply hilarious
Not Jeff chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
WHAT WAS THAT GOBLIN'S NAME!? I'm sorry, I nearly chocked upon reading that, and had to snicker after recovering. For ten, maybe twenty minutes. I just... wow.
jeanette9a chapter 10 . 11/17/2014
oh holley, the math teacher is the love child between lockhart and snape, i need some bleach now!
jeanette9a chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
i can't take him seriously with like that... i mean flatfoots not bad but the other one... just why?
noylj chapter 25 . 10/14/2014
What a horrible ending. Death Eaters or worse are going to play with Harry's clone and cause more trouble? Wasn't the fight with an impossibly strong and virtually unkillable Voldie enough?
InArduisFidelis-RAMC chapter 18 . 10/11/2014
Dobby/Snape? Now that is just disturbing ...
InArduisFidelis-RAMC chapter 17 . 10/11/2014
Dobby/Ron. That would be a very ... interesting read.
Priya Ashok chapter 25 . 10/9/2014
Good story. Thank you.
Steve2 chapter 4 . 10/6/2014
Very enjoyable.
amras2007 chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
I can't help but feel let down by this story. I read it because I was in the mood for a good humor story and while it started like that it turned the be more of a drama and somewhat depressing. And truthfully it annoyed the hell out of me, especially from the moment of voldemorts revival. Since then you Harry stopped being the fairly powerful and smart guy from the future and became a total pushover and that it's even taking into account his younger self, it's like he suddenly became dumb. Sorry I don't like to rant but I needed to spill my frustrations. You are a great writer I just feel the plot and charcters got lost at some point
FlopsyTheStingyDingo chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
I love how you turned Crabbe and Goyle into the hunch bunch
ravendor92 chapter 26 . 8/25/2014
Excellent work.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Something tells me that Goyle Sr.'s wife isn't exactly faithful.
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