Reviews for Murphy's Law
hearthandhomeauthor chapter 4 . 4/25
I'm greatly enjoying this story so far! I rarely ever read other's SOT stories (what few there are out there that are worth something) and actually enjoy them because I never feel they truly understood the story and characters like I do. Or it's just bad writing overall. But you do and write well! This story is very interesting to me; and you've inspired me to reconnect with my own series and dig a bit deeper into these characters I love so dearly. Great work so far. :) Something to work on... Maybe a bit more details in between scenes. I love your pacing. Just may want to consider filling in some of the gaps. I love how you intertwined Trent's family back into the spin-off, refer to Butch's daughter, included Trivette, etc. Those are aspects I absolutely positively love to do in my own work also! You depict each character so accurately. Again, great read so far! Now I need to go write on my own series. Thanks for the inspiration! haha

God Bless,
Guest chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
characters : walker ,Gage,Trent carols buth ,alex Angela ,JAKE ryan gage,
Guest chapter 3 . 2/9/2013
chapter two the kidnapping i want to bed at 9 that night 3months later syd had a boy wicth they named jake who is now 2 months we fell alsleep together in the rocking chair gage came in and said"hey shorty junior" but i did not respond he put the baby in his crib and carried me to my room 12;23 p.m. i felt somebody lifting me out of bed the next day i woke up ina well lit room next to stranger

back at the hose every one was wondering where i was they called walker and butch and they were ther e right away

it was was about an hour later when i heard "texas ranges ' then i knew they were all there while everyone esle was fight ing trent found me and carried me out then he and everyone else hugged me and we went home

i then woke up screaming "no!' then gage and trent were in the room they hugged me and calmedme down then we all lfell alsleep then every thing was fine dont miss the wtr middle school blues series if focusses on me and school and allthree babies Jake Breanna and Angela
Guest chapter 2 . 2/9/2013
It was monday I was at school when walker,s truck showed up it the parking lot i hopped in it and we drove home when we pulled up in the drive way he told me "Gage took Syd to her doctors appointment and Trent is still in LA so carlos is there " "ok thanks walker" i said as i went in the door "carols im home" he come down the steps with baby breanna syd and Gages daugther "hey kiddo" he said and handed me the baby "shes been wanting to see you all day" i know "im going to play with her in the nersary" i said and i took the 14 month old with me

1 hour later Sydney and Gage came home i heard them talking and realised they were watching there past adventures together "oh come on i was not jealous" "oh yeah' Syd said "then how do you expain this" she pointed to her six month pregnant belly "and this' I said careing Baby Breanna down "eavesdropper" gage said jokingley "francis " i said then ran to the gest room leaveing them with Breeanna
1hour later i was listening to "when your gone ' and singing along when i heard "goood song " "trentyour home! " isaid and ran to him "her kid why dont i take you down to uppercuts 'ok" i said
when we arrived i sat on the stool next to trent "hey kiddo what will it be" buth said "surprise me" i said
when i finished my orange soda and we went home
Gage39 chapter 9 . 6/25/2009
Pretty good but I didn't really like the ending. You should have had definite get-togethers and stuff. Still a good story though. Great job!
Ghostwriter chapter 9 . 6/17/2008
Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.
guardianM3 chapter 9 . 6/19/2007
I love this story! Every sentence, paragraph and chapter flows together and forms an exciting tale. Keep on writing, especially more Sons of Thunder fanfiction! Continue to keep everyone on their toes.
Cassandra30 chapter 9 . 6/12/2007
Way to go, Carlos! Good going!
Cassandra30 chapter 8 . 6/11/2007
Good going! Our guys to the rescue! Woot!
Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 6/11/2007
That kind of garbage shouldn't be all that hard to see through really. But it is amazing how many folks don't seem to be able to. Excellent chapter!
Cassandra30 chapter 6 . 6/11/2007
Excellent chapter! Full of mystery and intrigue!
Cassandra30 chapter 5 . 6/11/2007
Way to go! Evidence is always good!
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 6/11/2007
Ohh! Hope everything is still okay for both ladies!
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 6/11/2007
Danae is right Trent. Go with your instincts.
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 6/11/2007
More good stuff!
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