Reviews for Waters and Sky
Reloj chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
This is very good. I've always wanted to read a description of this scene in the game, if not write one. But this sounds and reads better than what I could ever write. Haha.

Nice choice of words. :)
Wot Wot Wark chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Quite beautiful. It's interesting that she walks back with her head held high. Nice job. :)
Rehime chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
This the first "Yuna's sending" novelization (that's not the word, but meh) that I've seen in a while.

It's really good, and I get the allusion at the end to Tidus' narrative.

Good work.
Le Pecore Nere chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Tis great, I love it, wholely and truely.
Pied Flycatcher chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
Nice. Pretty description. :) There are a few overlong or run-on sentences e.g. 'the tears glow as they fall as she comes to a graceful stop' - the double 'as' sounds awkward. I like the ending; the simple descriptions work best imo.