Reviews for The child incident and Kakashi's discovery
AMemelordAndWeeb chapter 3 . 4/16/2020
i'm addicted
AMemelordAndWeeb chapter 1 . 4/16/2020
reading this after watching your lie in april

cured my depression
PrettyInPink1515 chapter 4 . 2/21/2019
I'm hoping Gaara will win this poll! I know it's a bit late...hehe. You shouldn't of added Sasuke to the poll XD (I just read your AN).
PrettyInPink1515 chapter 3 . 2/21/2019
Ok, I'm not a fan on how emotional your characters are and how they all want to talk about things. To me they sound more like teenage girls and not the characters we love so much. Other than that, I love your story so far. It's an interesting concept and different! Which I like.
pinkymmg chapter 10 . 4/8/2018
Aww this is such a cute stor!
slyside chapter 1 . 2/9/2018
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CallMeHiromi chapter 1 . 12/21/2017
Wait.

THIS WAS JUST CHAPTER ONE?!

I THOUGHT I PASSED THROUGH LIKE, NINE CHAPTERS

IM GOING INSANE
Li chapter 1 . 10/12/2017
...? But fruit IS a food?!
Little-Red711 chapter 7 . 9/10/2017
I thought Sasuke was the bottom
AkaneShiro chapter 9 . 7/20/2017
I thought Gaara can't sleep?
KagomeMiyamoto chapter 10 . 2/18/2017
I'm not trying to discourage you, but the story wasn't for me
KagomeMiyamoto chapter 10 . 2/18/2017
okay, so I love the plot, however there are a few things you need to fix. Naruto isn't weak at all. He is actually pretty strong. so maybe add his jutsus that he learned from Ero-san. You kind of made everyone really weak. haha but hopefully you see this and know that I don't hate the story but it kind of went side ways after the first two chapters
Jj chapter 10 . 11/30/2016
Aww no Garra naru lemon "pouty face"
kittycat56321 chapter 3 . 9/4/2016
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Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
I llllllllllllloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvveeee this!
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