Reviews for Storm's Getting Closure
DobbyRoxMySox chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Aw, that's so sad... Great job on this, beautiful use of imagery.
WargishBoromirFan chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Pretty good piece, but the excess/misused commas kept jolting me out of the story, I'm afraid. For instance: "the windows of the largest Companion training house shimmered" works perfectly well without commas. So does "...Chinese characters into columns with a slender paintbrush." Otherwise, it's a nice insight into Inara.