Reviews for Hospital Revisited: After David Recognized Lizzie
xwingpilot chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Nice. This was so sweet. I felt like it was a little bit rushed though...Could have spread it out a little more, though...
askidkid chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
I loved the beginning :) Very sweet.I wish the story was longer reminded me of Romeo and Juliet :D

Well done!
Tempe4Booth chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
sweet i loved the ending
Kaitlin-B chapter 1 . 12/12/2008
Very sweet
drama989 chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
that was so cute! luvd it!
Danielle chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
it was average...but it was way too short for me...i'm a writer, i write books all the time...i guess im just not into stories so short like this.

but it was ok, i hope to see more.
SemperFiNeverForget051909 chapter 1 . 4/9/2008
Relapse and attempted suicide...NICE. how about spreading it out/Making it longer? That'll be cool.
Buffy's boyfriend chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Short but sweet next time make it longer though
LinkinParkLove chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
I liked it, but I also agree it needed to be spread out more. It reminded me of Romeo & Juliet, only with a happy ending... kind of melodramatic, but good job. )
miss seann william scott chapter 1 . 11/24/2007
that was very choppy, no offense. it has potential, if you spread it out a little bit more. you are good person at coming up with ideas. however you just need to...

spread it out. seriously.
Aquamarine Kitten chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
WOW...relapse, attempted suicide, coming out of the relapse...a bit overdramatic if you ask me, but it somehow fit. nice job. :)