|Reviews for Excerpt|
| shy7cat chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
I have been reduced to a squealing mess of fangirlish glee by your words. Seriously all I can think is a continuous cycle of "SPLE omfg this is flipping amazing sple!" This is how this pairing should be written, darnit and I am so glad there is someone in the world who realizes it! Your writing blended so well with the canon bits that it seemed so natural for this to have occurred! This pairing, canonically speaking, is pretty much impossible and I am moved to tears by how in-character you made it seem. So thank you thank you!
| Yuki neko Kira chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
He he...yay! XD I was reading that part earlier and I went "Dude, Barty's STROKING Natty's shoulder? Is the author a yaoi fan?" there are defiantly some yaoi-hinted scenes there but not enough of 'em D: Well, we have fanfiction for that! Thank you for writing this!
| nopenopnope chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
I think I need to print this version out and place it where it belongs in the book...
Subtle but intense -
| veroniCa chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
This is hot! I always loved how the scene went in the book but I liked your version even better. Poor Nathaniel ;)
| reeby10 chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
hehe that was good. i was gonna go look this passage up in my book but i realized someone else has my copy! so ill just have to do with this awesome rewrite! hehe :D
| VickyVicarious chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
That was amazing. Seriously. I am in awe. This fic was what converted me to Bartimaeus/Nathaniel. Just... wow. GREAT job.
| Zoius and the Devil chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
feck, i was SO waiting for the slash while reading that bit in AoS! i swear to gawd i was expecting it! this is a brilliant enhancement!
| Kaitlin chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Oh, my god. XD Perfect. I actually grabbed my copy and read along, and oh, boy, it really is quite similar. Ahaha, you made my day.
| riverfeathers chapter 1 . 3/21/2008
that was such a tease!
| ShiTiger chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
Wow. I love how you wrote everything Nathaniel was feeling, and still kept Bartimaeus in character. You can just see this scene leading to a lemon in the future.
| bamkam chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
O_O *topples out of her chair* Holy crap, Barty is such a tease.
| Kyrian chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Oh, that wasn't canon?
What was this, Surely not. Clearly that was in the book. Stroud just forgot to write it in...
Seriously, though. Good job. Are you Jonathon Stroud in disguise?
And why exactly ISN'T that in the book?
| as the stars watch me descend chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
O My thoughts exactly.
Awesome fic! _
| hermione032192 chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
| BakuraSenov chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Amazing! Please update this soon!