Reviews for Better That We Break
OstentatiousNature chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
i didn't like the beginning that much, but it got better and better as the story progressed.

interesting how you show that, during New Moon, bella's life ends up sort of like Charlie's did.

i never thought about that

very very good towards the end.

luv the last line-i remember it from New Moon!
Kuyeng13-The Heart Logos chapter 2 . 6/12/2007
NO please make it a story T-T i promise to review...
Christiecullen16 chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
It's pretty well written, and it's really sad. I liked it :D.
she is brighter chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
WELL i guess you have to right more, since i'm the majority vote, and i ask kindly (but not demandingly) foryou to write more! that would make a GreAT preface though!