|Reviews for Jashin|
| Shinozuka Kou chapter 2 . 4/13
Your story's really good, and I really like this version of Naruto, but... Dude, you really need a beta. Your spelling's a bit, uh, well, it-it's pretty bad. Sorry. No offense.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
LEARN TO SPELL ASSHOLE! WHAT THE HELL IS FETIGUE? IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE FATIGUE! STOP GIVING MANKIND A BAD NAME!
| lazyharpseal chapter 12 . 10/14/2014
LAZY HARP SEAL
| Sfrbcry chapter 7 . 4/13/2014
This was funny.
I am very amused.
HOLY CRAP THAT WAS HILARIOUS!
| alemery chapter 12 . 3/4/2014
Insanity with a plot. Nice.
| demiread chapter 12 . 2/3/2014
this was awesome i hope you find more inspiration for other masterpieces
| Fearling001 chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
u don't have the summoning contract to summon Klucky
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/11/2013
You sing canary-kun
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/21/2013
This sucks the plot is confusing...not complicated at all...but lacking creativity and it looks like a canon naruto who is a little less retarded
| Senju Serena chapter 4 . 9/14/2013
I'm sorry but you should've thought the plot out more for your story. First of all, if Sasuke and Sakura lost their teammate, then they wouldn't be allowed to participate in the 3rd round. Second, no ninja worth their worth would've acted like Naruto now if someone was treating them that way...i can't even finish this chapter.
| Mazzi chapter 7 . 8/2/2013
FISHCAKE NARUTO ! Did you know? :D
| Anarchy-Bell101 chapter 12 . 7/24/2013
Please update soon!:) Really good story!
| the bitch chapter 4 . 7/13/2013
da fuck is wrong with you are you fucking crazy
| Kyoki Kamanoke Shinigami chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Just to say, it's Jashin, not Jasin.
| ShadowFireZelda chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
The Forest of Death is Training Ground 44 not 42. Otherwise thsi story is pretty good.