|Reviews for Midnight|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/13
This is truly amazing I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into this and you deserve more credit for your amazing work
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/12
I came, I read, I came. God damn, I hate the idea of Kouta loving Yuka as more than a cousin but I feel like this is the shit Lucy would be dealt considering she luck. Oh well qué será será!
Thanks for the nut
-a creepy fat asian kid
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
sex DOES sell that's true!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Yuka sucks lucy rules
| tetraforce theory chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Good! I'm only six years late. This isn't actually land probably won't be the last time either" reading this story. But the first time was before my account existed and I don't like reviewing as a guest. Assuming your still writing or check this out id love to PM with the author. I've also been reading you older works though not all "FMA and FOP".
| shadow dragoon chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
hey dont sell your self short wasnt a bad story for E.L. followed lucys mentality pretty well on that she knows shes a monster and tortures her self with that idea that no one could love her. bit short but thats just a personal preference that i like story's to be a little more in depth over all good short story
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Not enough sex
| D chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
I freaking hate Yuka so much. LUCY AND KOUTA FOREVER 3
| fanficfan chapter 1 . 9/16/2012
| Wicked AlyKat chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
I liked the story, but it was very short. I think it should have had a little more detail. Very good start for Elfen Lied, though! Btw: love the series! Gettin' "Lilium" tattooed on me sometime soon! :D
| RAW19 chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
It was an excellent soul-searcher. Intense, sensual, and emotional. Good job.
| NotSoNormal1432 chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
pretty good. i happened upon this fanfic by chance, and i must say, it's pretty impressive. I dont understand why people make such a big fuss over sex in fanfics.. sex IS a natural part of life, after all. I beleive that I might even read some of your other fanfics as well. I am especially interested in the Full metal alchemist fanfic.
by the way, you watched it all in one day? wow, pretty impressive.
| LaDyOfThEdArKeYeS chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
Nice job )
| Gabo-kun chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
damn, that was so beautifully sad! the "I love you, Yuka" part almost sent me to tears o_o' i loved this story x3
| KAZEONI chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
An interesting story I think Kouta needed that however I think it wold have been better if she woke him up but I like the way you have it good job.