Reviews for Joey's Torment
SasuNaruRocks10001 chapter 2 . 2/11/2013
I like his story a lot, but maybe you could fix your paragraphs up...?

Like:
Yugi was worried about Joey and when he told Yami about it, Yami told him that he would contact Seto and find out exactly what was going on. When Yami talked to Seto, "Seto admitted that he knew where Joey was and that he had been hurt by his father and was at his home where he could be guarded in case his father tried to hurt him again." Yami then asked "could Yugi and the others be told as a precaution, in case his father tries to get them to tell him where Joey was?" Seto thought for a minute and then he told Yami "go ahead and let them know, but tell them that if his father should ask they are to tell him that they don't know."

to:
Yugi was worried about Joey and when he told Yami about it, Yami told him that he would contact Seto and find out exactly what was going on.

When Yami talked to Seto, "Seto admitted that he knew where Joey was and that he had been hurt by his father and was at his home where he could be guarded in case his father tried to hurt him again."

Yami then asked "could Yugi and the others be told as a precaution, in case his father tries to get them to tell him where Joey was?"

Seto thought for a minute and then he told Yami "go ahead and let them know, but tell them that if his father should ask they are to tell him that they don't know."

Other wise, GOOD JOB, LOVING IT :P
blo01170 chapter 3 . 3/8/2012
you should add a warning saying seto is ooc. :) otherwise great story
Cartlin chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
umm, do you really mean molested? That means sexually abused.
xxxSlaughterHouseCatxxx chapter 13 . 7/22/2007
i loved your story as usual.
TheFemalePharaoh chapter 12 . 6/15/2007
OMG!

Journey Maker, your vows were wonderfully written! I loved both weddings!

I am so glad that everyone found both justice and happines in the end. I hoped that Mary and Roland would get mattied as well!

WELL DONE! I TIP MY HAT TO YOU!
BrightestStarInTheNightSky chapter 13 . 6/15/2007
good endind i love this story :)
dragonlady222 chapter 13 . 6/15/2007
Nice ending. I'm so glad Wilma and Larry got over their prejudice and accepted greg into their lives.
dragonlady222 chapter 12 . 6/15/2007
Beautiful vows and perfect weddings.

Good chapter.
TheFemalePharaoh chapter 11 . 6/14/2007
I LOVED ALL THIS!

Poor Jou...poor Josh...I AM SO GLAD MARY SHOT THAT BASTARD!

Please...you must keep this up!
dragonlady222 chapter 11 . 6/13/2007
Cute chapter. I'm glad his parents accepted them as a couple.
dragonlady222 chapter 10 . 6/13/2007
I'm glad Mary could talk some sense into them. Good chapter.
dragonlady222 chapter 9 . 6/13/2007
Good chapter. Sounds like someone is not so accepting of their lifestyle. Too bad.
dragonlady222 chapter 8 . 6/12/2007
Good chapter.
dragonlady222 chapter 7 . 6/12/2007
Good chapter. I guess love makes Seto generous.
dragonlady222 chapter 6 . 6/12/2007
Good chapter. This is really great. I'm glad his dad is dead.
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