Reviews for System Breakdown, A Naruto Story
Crazy Cherries chapter 5 . 3/5/2011
It was good, but a little rushed, maybe you should go back and make it a little longer?
A. Sirius Riddle chapter 5 . 11/2/2010
Good story

Good plot

BUT you rushed things in the end
A. Sirius Riddle chapter 5 . 11/2/2010
Good story

Good plot

BUT you rushed things in the end
MidnightCherryBlossomCat chapter 5 . 6/28/2010
WOW THIS IS GREAT!

Can't wait to read what happens next!
ellabobella chapter 5 . 7/26/2009
This was a really good little short story! I liked the fact that it was in Sasuke's point of view.
LivingInSymphony chapter 5 . 2/18/2009
It was kinda short..it felt almost rushed..in a way.

But, regardless, it was good!
Siah Yasana chapter 5 . 5/14/2008
um that would only need 2 chaps to do but it was...OK. 5-10
slavetothekeyboard chapter 5 . 12/31/2007
cool
chocolatetomatoes chapter 1 . 11/17/2007
I love this story
MovedOver chapter 4 . 6/12/2007
fluffy
MovedOver chapter 5 . 6/12/2007
This is it! WA -crying- please update soon and a little longer chapter? Please?
Merridaine chapter 5 . 6/12/2007
The content is very good but why dont you make the chapters longer by combining them? For example 3, 4 and 5 were a little short... just a suggestion nice update again
Merridaine chapter 4 . 6/12/2007
Is this to be a short story?
chantpleure chapter 2 . 6/12/2007
OMG i luv it

It's really well written.

I look forward to the next few chapters!
MovedOver chapter 3 . 6/12/2007
"SYSTEM BREAKDOWN"!1

This chapter was kinda short well actually just short. Can u make the next one longer? Well anyways I still liked this chapter.
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