|Reviews for Five Times Dean did the washing up|
| lovestoread16 chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
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| rabid-squirell-3 chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
this is so depressing, i literally sighed once i got to six. Dean always got the short end of the stick on everything. im realy depressed now. thank you! that wwas saracasm lol. but seriously, im reading most of you stories right now and this is just down right depressing
| JenBurch chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
That's mean! For two reasons...
ONE - it made me look at my kitchen sink and shudder... between my husband working ALL the time and my back going out on me, I think we need to get Dean over here! lol
TWO - it took me a second to realise what the last two lines meant! i just got off the phone and picked this up and by the time I got to the bottom page my brain was slowly starting to function again... and there! Bang! My head hit the ground as I fell off my seat - again!
*shakes head* You're definitely one for writing evil fics :( Everything's supposed to come out hunky dory, everyone smiling, with rosie cheeks and a beer! No fair! :(
*sobs* And you know what else is really unfair? I still loved this fic! It was great, it was well written, the bit at the beginning with Dean's teddy was adorable and just made me wanna cry - pregnant remember? lol And then Bobby being a slob and Sam trying to convince Dean the dishes were finished and... well, the whole thing was brilliant! Would LOVE to know what gave you the idea of washing up! lol
But now I'm gonna have to go and cry... :( Dean can't go! he has to stay with Sammy! *sob*
Great story, hun! Loved it! (and hated it hehehehe Complicated breed we SPN fans are LoL)
Gonna hunt through more of your stuff now :)
PS I'm pretty sure I just heard your inbox sigh!
| Jayy chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
The last one is my favorite. It's so short and simple, but it packs a punch.
| IheartSam7 chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
that was good. you should make the #4 into a real long story- I loved the brotherly love they showed each other- especially Sam taking care of Dean like that!
| Charlie Girl 79 chapter 1 . 8/20/2007
Wow! excellent journey from childhood to #5. Really liked Dean washing dishes in Palo Alto, always protective, wanting to check out the neighborhood where Sammy lives, just to make sure Sammy gets the rest he needs. Then the touching moment when he leaves town without a backward glance.
Hopefully geek boy will find a way to save his big brother before #6 takes place.
| DreamBrother chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
No. 6 was a stunner. I love it when a few lines are the greater impact ones. They're fun to write, as well.
No. 1 was my favourite, mostly because of: "She’s fairly sure a mother shouldn’t think that about her own kids but Dean looked damn goofy when the teeth were still coming through and the huge gaps made him look like a deranged chipmunk."
Any sentence with the word ''goofy'' in it is sure to be a winner :) Oh Missouri...we want you back, pronto.
Nice fic, good job :)
| supergirl3684 chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
The third time you wrote about actually broke my heart! That was a great story!
| TraSan chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
That was awesome!
I love how you took us through the years with this, although I hope your implication in 6 is never fulfilled. (c:
| Aimed mischief chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Wow, this was amazing! I loved it _ Excellent work, yo!
| JazzyIrish chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
Wow, you take a simple task like washing dishes and create this poignant piece. You truly are a phenomenal writer. Your words create such vivid visual images. You are a master at that.
The first vignette was so cute (Semper Fi Bear - I love it). Little Dean learning how to help his mother with the dishes while she's thinking about how John is influencing his son with stories about monsters and horror. Little did she know. Number 2 left me feeling so sorry for Dean and all the responsibility he had to shoulder at a young age. Number 3 made me angry with Sam and wish I could comfort Dean. Number 4 was a touching scene showing Sam's loving care of his older brother - and redeemed him a bit. Number 5 made me remember how "broked" Dean was when he lost his father and how nothing he did could make it better. He should have learned from that, because Number 6 broke me.
Thanks for sharing this amazing work with us. Until next time...
| Anna chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
OUCH! This was beautiful but so very painful at the end. I love the way you wrote this but I hate that I feel like crying now.
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
I enjoyed all of it but #6. I refuse to think about that.
| mysong chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
these were so nice, some that made me tear. *sniffle* the last one was so simple, but was so sad. damn, dean and that deal. ;)
| alwaysateen chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
I like it! Especially the #1 (with mom and baby Dean), #4 (hurt Dean) and little #6 (so sad).