That was a tad disturbing, 2 against 1, ouch. Poor Jack. He will be walking funny for a few weeks after this.

WOW...a whole chapter with full on sex...that's...well I'm really shy at sex scene but I don't mind,keep up the good work.

Overall,as an X-Play host(in my dreams),I'll give you a 4 out of 5.

An AU...this is interesting.

Overall,as an X-Play host(in my dreams),I'll give you a 3 out of 5.

Holy crap what a hot chapter! I am hoping to see some Ennis/Jack one on one action though. This could be the beginning of a beautiful relationship if they do it right. Still OOC but not bad. It's an interesting spin for sure. :)

Definitely OOC for Ennis...I'll be interested to see what happens next, though I think I have a pretty good idea of it so far...what an interesting story. Keep up the good work. :)