Reviews for Deadpan Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this! How cute they're~ I hoped it was longer, but I see there's a sequel so I'm off to reading it! Thanks for writing this lovely fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! Beast boy is adorable and you have no idea how RELIEVED I am that we are NOT getting a makeover. That trope is tired and old-fashioned, and Raven knows who she is and Beast Boy loves her for it— RESPECT! Also you have so many funny parts! I love the part about the little girl sending Beast Boy fan mail lol -Emma |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay but the DIALOGUE? Five stars, man! So good! I feel like this was written very realistically and all the characters make perfect sense! Well done, truly. ;) Also you write great humor. And Raven? She’s EPIC in this. I absolutely love that she takes the initiative and the WAY she does it is so her! So many people write her in a way that changes her character or makes her more “palatable” for most people, and to me that’s such a BORE. *snooze* I love that you keep her cool and intimidating and a chill friend when it comes down to it, and not some emo schoolgirl. All the characters felt true to the show and act realistically and practically to the situation. Agh, it’s so nice! Great job, man. -Emma |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is insannnne! I was actually looking for an old fic about how raven’s dead and turned into a ghost (btw if anyone knows this fic please hmu) but i came across this and realised that this is THE VERY FIRST FIC I READ ON FFNET! I didn’t have an acc at the time so i defo forgot to save this. Omg my mind is blOwn! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a sweet story! I loved the growth in Rae and Gar’s relationship as well as the growth of the team as a whole. The awkwardness of starting a relationship with another friend in same same friend group, especially when said friend group lives together, was on point and all the quiet moments of friendship and relationships were awesome. I also really loved how the story’s POV and how you would use the official names during outside moments and the nicknames during private moments. Thank you so much for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice ending. You should add a part 3. |
![]() ![]() A follow up review: I've wondered, would human doctors and nurses know what to do with Starfire? Are veins in the same places? Is a saline solution good or bad for her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That battle was intense. Ger wasn't going to just call for a timeout and a forfeit. Raven is going to have he hands full hearing the others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Best Couple Ever." They have come a long way since that chess match |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sure they will sort this "disappointment" out. Mike? That will be a bigger problem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They will be better prepared next time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's getting serious! And of course. And it figures that the tattletale nurse's name is Karen! And poor Robin, he's bracing himself for all the tabloid stories that will be coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Star is such a good friend. And ... Gar? ... will be escorting her to the doctor's. Hmmm ... maybe Robin could bribe me to work out? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I suppose the Justice League has an OB in the Watchtower. Maybe Raven go go there? Raven and BB seem to be syncing pretty well, almost too well. Hope nothing bad happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Relationship in progress! Loved the mugger scene. So, off to date #2! |