|Reviews for Deadpan Love|
| MisterMead chapter 14 . 10/7
I’ve had such a good time reading through this story, your take on the characters puts me right in there with them. Kind of mean sequel hook cliffhanger at the end but I feel well satisfied having read through it. You should feel good about your work you put into this.
| DUH BOMB chapter 14 . 10/5
Ah snap Slade!
| Johnny Beast chapter 14 . 9/16
Damn this was like the second fanfic I read back in 2014, I had no idea that it was still going but I’m glad I found out. I think the last time I read this it only had about three or four chapters. The last thing I remembered was Rae and Gar’s first date. But, now it has more than ten chapters and I can’t wait to see what happens now.
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/14
Your a great writer
| dld51 chapter 1 . 9/6
I really enjoyed this story. The verbal sparing between Raven and Garfield was funny and entertaining. Garfield's ability to be the person Raven needed and wanted. Cyborg realizing he is being immature about the young couples relationship. Raven falling in love with Garfield. This was overall a well written story. My one disappointment with the story. I wish that the story was longer. More chapters and updates are needed.
Maybe if enough people requested more chapters. The writer,(Gwaihir10 ) would come back and add to it.
| Gwaihir10 chapter 1 . 8/20
To anyone who chooses to read these reviews, you will below notice a "review" from someone who calls themselves "Speaking The Truth." I apologize for my story subjecting people to the lunatic ramblings of this rude, arrogant person. I have made several requests that it be removed but it has bot and a personal request to the individual for an apology was received with derision and ill-manners all too typical of the kind of mindless, amoral lowlifes that post that sort of thing.
| ssjEasterBunny chapter 14 . 8/11
Haha what was with that first paragraph? 'A party was attempted but it sucked, the end.'
"TK" is... telekinesis?
So our protagonist pair gets some reprieve, and I like that you always include the down time in this story. It helps me feel like I'm reading about real characters and not just super heros. If the need for a break was established before this chapter, then I missed it, and things progressed quickly from Gar saying, "I'm tired" to he and Raven arriving at the safe house. It also wasn't clear to me that this evening was their first time having sex, just because they seemed to both go for it very quickly and easily. I did like the way you handled that scene, setting up what they were about to do and then transitioning to a later time.
It wouldn't be a Titans story without Slade showing up. I'm curious what he'll do with someone as powerful as Mike as his ally. Perhaps we'll learn more about the workings of Mike's abilities.
| Speaking-the-truth16 chapter 1 . 8/4
If you can see what's happening in the world today, since it's all over and the problems are only getting worse, just know that these are the end times; the days Jesus warned about. He gave us signs to look for which can be found in Matthew 24 in the bible and told us to watch. To not let these times come upon you unaware.
Understand that the rapture is at hand and can happen any moment. The day of the Lord is coming like a thief in the night and you do not want to be left behind.
When I reach out to people I encourage them to come out of this world and to seek the father in heaven while he may be found since 1 John 2:17 tells us in the Word of God aka the bible:
"The world and its desires pass away, but whoever does the will of God lives forever."
A lot of popular anime, games, movies, books, music and etc is of the devil. You don't want to be indulging in something that has no place in the kingdom of God since that will put your soul at risk. 1 John 2:15-17 and James 4:4 is important to remember since we can't be holding hands with the world and Jesus. These holidays & traditions a lot of us were brought up on has nothing to do with our father in heaven, is of the world and is only a distraction; please don't get caught up with it.
Realize that fiction by definition is "invention or fabrication as opposed to fact" along with other definitions out there and you want to be careful. I use to be a fanfic writer myself but I gave up a lot of things because a lot of it was related or connected to the world.
There is nothing wrong with writing but when you're writing about worldly things or fabricating stuff, you're putting yourself in danger since we're to walk in truth. Liars won't inherit the kingdom of God so you want to make sure you're speaking truth at all times.
Jesus told us at John 14:23-24 that if you love him then you'd obey his teaching. He also says at John 14:15 that if you love him then to keep his commandments.
I'd get away from fan fiction altogether, since it's only a distraction, and build a strong relationship with Jesus Christ since it's very important but that's a decision you will have to make for yourself.
Just know that all the issues going on in the world has already been foretold in the bible.
If you are awake and aware to everything going on, then please: seek the father in heaven while he may be found, repent of your sins, let go of this world and follow Jesus as mentioned at Matthew 10:37-38; majority of the things we need to know is in the Word of God so please read the bible for yourself. You don't want to be deceived since a lot of churches out there aren't doing what they should be doing.
Be aware that there isn't much time left but don't adopt the spirit of fear since greater is he that is in you than he who is in the world. You need faith since without it, it's impossible to please the father in heaven so never let the devil steal that or your peace. Just draw close to the father in heaven and he will draw close to you.
We've all fallen short so nobody is better than anybody and the heavenly father is very merciful. Just humble yourself, go to the father in prayer, confess your sins to him and repent. Mean what you say & repent (turn away or stop doing it) and he will forgive you.
Jehovah is the god of Abraham, Issac and Jacob but nobody comes to the father but through the son Jesus Christ so you want to accept and follow him since it's by his blood we're redeemed back to the father in heaven.
A great deception is coming along with the antichrist and you do not want to take the mark of the beast. It's a chip that goes in your right hand or forehead. You can read about this in Revelation. Do not take this Mark, worship the beast or his image because if you do then you will end up in hell. Stay strong in Jesus. Only he can save us and he is a lot closer than people realize so be ready at all times and keep the faith.
| dld51 chapter 14 . 7/29
This was a great chapter. I like how close Raven and Beast Boy. I hope you continue this story.
| BlueLion chapter 14 . 7/24
quite a conclusion. I guess this story is complete, and we'll have to wait for a sequel story, right?
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/21
This is easily one of my favorite bbrae stories. It reads like the cartoon writers had no content restrictions and it is so faithful to how the characters actually act and I beg you continue it.
| JasonVUK chapter 14 . 7/19
So is this the end of the story? Or an end of an arc?
Either way it's a great ending! I was worried about the team when dealing with Mike.
But I'm happy everyone got out alright and BB and Rae did the do! :D
How old were they in this story by the way?
I originally thought it was a little while after the Tokyo movie.
| ThommyPickles chapter 14 . 7/19
Loved it. I really love the additions to this.
| titanfan45 chapter 14 . 7/18
Fantastic chapter. I especially liked the poker references to their relationship.
| Chaotic.Coffee.Bean chapter 14 . 7/18
I absolutely love the way you handled their night together. You said so much without really saying anything and it was great! That ending though! I knew after such a cute chapter it was bound to end with more excitement to come.