Reviews for Deadpan Love |
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Raven Logan chapter 8 . 3/5/2016 I know it's been long but can you continue this story i love it |
ktaylor2014 chapter 1 . 11/8/2015 I really adored this fanfiction! It's already established in the summary that this fanfiction will have Raven out of her character so the relationship will progress pretty fast because by making Raven take initiative, you are cutting down the inner conflict she has. Not all of it; there's still some; it's just different than if this would have progressed naturally and without the initiative. My only complaint is that I felt the ending was a tad abrupt. I enjoyed the humor and the wit. The dialogue was truly exquisite and totally in character for them. |
BBRaeveryday chapter 8 . 10/16/2015 o.m.g. this is so cute |
AboveNzT chapter 8 . 9/8/2015 Loved it, just that the end didn't feel like it was raven, of course this is just a friendly opinion and thanks again for a great read! |
BlankRaven chapter 1 . 8/19/2015 ThAtS ThE EnD?! SeQUeL NoW |
Hossyboy chapter 8 . 7/21/2015 This story was beautiful, it its own short way. I loved it, not only are you a skilled writer but you're very good at comedy. Although the comedy was subtle it truly made me laugh, I enjoyed all the little jokes and puns. The ending was also perfect and ties it all together. This is definitely one of my favorite Raven and Beast Boy fanfictions. Thank you for this lovely story. |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/10/2015 ...wwwwhhhhyyyy!:( cliffhanger... |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/9/2015 :) nice story |
Guest chapter 8 . 5/30/2015 Maaaan. How have I not seen this earlier?! This whole thing was well written, humourous, cute and overall a spectacular fic. Nice job, bro. |
NA1234455 chapter 8 . 5/15/2015 It is indeed what it is. As much as I feel that there should have been more of Raven losing control of her powers and that their relationship moved along a little too fast, I also get that this wasn't supposed to be a really angsty fanfic. It was comical and really cute, and satisfied the hopeless romantic in me. For what you were trying to achieve, good job. |
NA1234455 chapter 1 . 5/15/2015 Can I just say that this story is wrong on so many levels? Yet here I am, going to discard the entire impossibility of this scenario and all the "WHAT!" moments, because even though you are completely ignoring the fact that Raven would never do this,this story already figures among my favorites for being so damn hilarious and actually quite endearing. Congratulations. XD |
Demigoddess chapter 8 . 5/9/2015 I know that this may not mean much, and that, you having not been active on this site for many years, you may not even read it, but this is the best kind of story. Although I enjoy cotton-candy-sweet-pillow-stuffing-soft-fluff on most occasions, it would not have fit this story, nor the characters. It had well-timed funny (ah, who am I kidding, hilarious) parts, but not so many that it distracted from the plot. If you're reading this, I know that you may not care for writing anymore, or may be too busy and not have time for it, but on behalf of all my fellow readers, from the bottom of our hearts, I sincerely hope that you continue writing. I know that this may sound incredibly formal, and be amazingly, grade-A cheesy, but every word of it is true. I think we all agree on that. |
farhan99 chapter 8 . 4/3/2015 absolutely the best fanfiction i've ever read! i re read this one at least 3 times its so amazing. The only thing i'm disappointed about is to see that you haven't written anything else involving beast boy and raven. I don't know what else to say this story was beautiful, romantic, funny all while capturing the characters of the show amazingly well. Most fics go the route of the characters going through unnecessary drama (i.e one of them is in danger, or separated or whatever) you kept this story purely on their relationship on kept the focus on that while keeping it interesting. I've yet to find another story like this. Great job! |
Lady Punk chapter 1 . 4/3/2015 I WAS SCREAMING THE ENTIRE FUCKING TIME! OH HOLY MOTHER OF GEORGE WASHINGTON! THAT WAS AMAZING! :'D |
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