|Reviews for Deadpan Love|
| shugokage chapter 15 . 2/11/2019
Great job on this fun story!
| TheRealXenocide chapter 15 . 2/10/2019
Well, you did it. You avoided the pitfalls of continuing a finished story that so many others, including professionals, have suffered. Instead, you gave us a second phase of this story that was easily worthy of the first. Impressive, and well done.
Mike's escape does leave an opening for a third phase, but it doesn't seem necessary, especially after the epilogue.
| iron.exe chapter 15 . 2/10/2019
I don't want this to be the end!
| dld51 chapter 15 . 2/10/2019
This has been a GREAT story. The creative interaction between the characters were witty. The back and forward between Garfield and Raven was funny. But I am sorry to see this story end. I hope the writer will reconsider and continue the story. It's to good to stop.
| titanfan45 chapter 15 . 2/10/2019
I hate to see the story end. I thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter. Thank you for all of your work to finish this very well written tale.
| YumeTakato chapter 15 . 2/10/2019
I enjoyed it, thank you~
| GoodOldFaith chapter 15 . 2/10/2019
Thank you for fulfilling your word. Until next time.
| sam chapter 14 . 1/29/2019
this was so sweet and cute, really well handled!
| CommanderThaum chapter 14 . 1/27/2019
Alright. I had originally left a guest review as Commanderthaum late at night after reading this. It's morning now and I've had a lot to think about the story.
First off I would like to say that this story was great. I haven't watched the Teen Titans show but this seemed like they were casted perfectly. I could envision everything that has happened to the characters. You really felt like you were there with the team as well as BB and Rae as their relationship progressed. I found it odd that Raven just states things like "for now baby and chick are off limits" but then again this is Raven so it's not that odd.
Secondly I have two gripes about this. I felt like you could've made this story longer. 14 chapters just seemed too short unless this was an arc. To me it seemed that Gar and Rae's relationship progressed quite quickly from a kiss in the doorway to spending nights casually sleeping together to have sex on their getaway trip. I felt like you could've progressed their relationship more slowly and even spread it across more chapters. I don't know how else to describe it.
Now my second gripe, I personally and morally disagree to Rae and Gar having sex and spending nights in Rae's room. But I'm not the author so I will continue to read this despite those two minor personal dislikes.
Well, that's what I thought of the story. I hope you update soon or if this is just a book that you make the sequel soon. Keep up the good work man.
| CommanderThaum chapter 14 . 1/26/2019
Great story so far. I thought it moved a little fast but now that I've read all 14 chapters I don't think so.
I morally don't agree with Gar and Rae having sex but whatever. Otherwise keep up the good work man and please update it soon with the next chapter. I'll be following this story. (I'm on my PC and have an FF account but forgot my password; I apologize for the anonymous review)
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/31/2018
...what were the results?
| screamer chapter 10 . 11/23/2018
Ok yeah! This chapter was NOT here when i last read this fic. Wow. Im insanely happy. New content...wow. Love this
| screamer chapter 6 . 11/23/2018
STARFIRE I LOVE YOUU
| screamer chapter 4 . 11/22/2018
Ahhh. Ok! Their date went well... Starfire was so cute. This fic is so funny & entertaining. Very in character too! Love the tone
| screamer chapter 3 . 11/22/2018
Aahdhhdskjddldjdlld... Beast boy ! That was so funny & nerve wracking at the same time. Oof. I love their banter. So much chemistry !