Reviews for Deadpan Love
Agent of the Divine One chapter 4 . 6/26/2007
Cool. :) I especially liked how Starfire put the guys in line and how Beast Boy and Raven responded to the "mugging".

But if that is what their first date is like I can only imagine how the next will go. :)
OtakuTeen chapter 3 . 6/24/2007
yay! awsome update!
Ravyn13 chapter 3 . 6/24/2007
This just keeps getting better and better!

You really have got the characters down.

I can't wait for more.


Dana chapter 3 . 6/24/2007
Oh God, your dialogue is hilarious. And now that you've thrown this whole "sterile" idea into the story, I'm more captivated than ever. I was excited about the whole date thing but now I have to know if Raven can have children or not. Keep doing what you're doing! I love your story And thank you for the consistency of updating- I would probably go mad if you waited an entire month.

Also, my favorite part was when Robin and Cyborg "razzed" Beast Boy. (:
Tarah21300 chapter 3 . 6/23/2007
...nice. You MUST update! This story is way too interesting! I kinda admire your style. Not many people would write about Raven asking Beastboy out. It's usually vice versa. Anyway, I'm starting to ramble...just remember to update.*adds story to her favorites*

Keep up the good work!
The Sacred and Profane chapter 3 . 6/22/2007
Excellent job! I'm adding this to my favorites and updates. Keep up the excellent work Gwaihir-dono! You are a master of dialogue. Check out some of my own BB/Rae fics if you like.
Setesh chapter 3 . 6/22/2007
a Great fic, I'm looking forward to what happens next.
Lusankya chapter 3 . 6/22/2007
Very good chapter! I just love to see Beast Boy and Raven's relationship develop under your talented fingers. The biological problems is a nice twist, I never thought about that! It is very true though, and it adds nicely to your story. Can't wait for the next developments! Keep on writing, you rock big time!
LOGEN chapter 3 . 6/22/2007
mmhm, mesa like. keep going. you are doing a good job.
The Flying Frog chapter 3 . 6/22/2007
Another amazing chapter of keeping everyone in character. How do you keep everyone in character like that?
The Hidden Girl chapter 3 . 6/22/2007
I love this story! I was so happy when I saw there was an update. I squee'd with glee. This is exactly how I believe everyone's...reproductive genetics worked, although I figured Raven could produce half breeded children. But your way is more interesting. I'm interested in seeing the outcome if Raven ever decides to get tested.

I found Beast Boy 'diverting' Raven very cute. She has to be diverted sometimes. People have to actually think on their feet when they're pushed out of their norm, thus putting a little more thought or feeling into their responses because they can't use the auto-response they might've if the distraction had not occured.

The only odd thing I found about this chapter is everyone's talking about Raven and Beast Boy having sex and they haven't even gone on their first date. I sorta had the same situation as the two, meaning I had the same circumstances as them as far as living together in the same Tower for a while. I lived on a co-ed floor last year and I became friends with a guy on my floor. We got to know each other, spend time together, hang out, and eventually after months he asked me out. It wasn't until after our date (about half a week later) that my good friend (also my roomie) gave me the whole "you take it too fast and kick your butts" talk. But I suppose not everything can go the same way. If it did, it'd be pretty boring.

Anyways, I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait until the two actually get to their date, although the preperation for is also interesting to read about. Just don't stretch it out too long or readers'll lose interest.

Have a nice day!

IGAF-kun chapter 3 . 6/22/2007
Very nice update. Keep it up.
Kiome-Yasha chapter 3 . 6/22/2007
Poor Raven, finding out that she can't perhaps have babies. Oh well, they did say that Beast boy could be the only person able to get her pregnant, and that's all us fans need _. I'm still excited to see how the date will go.
Dragon Eva chapter 3 . 6/22/2007
I love this, I really do. This is extactly how the occpations of the tower would recact. Because a small thing between Raven and Beast Boy is huge.

You clearly thought out the reproduction idea, and I'm impressed. Everey else seems to have decided "..Uh..I dunno..Lets just give em' kids. Kids are cute! Yay!"

Raven's way of getting to the point, and Beast Boys humar are dead on. I like that Star would find as weird as us her. She strange customs, but to her there averege, and I would assume are traditions are new to her as well.

There where part I didn't like (-wait, this is comploment!), but I didnt like them in the sense that somthing bad was happening, and you got me to emathize with the characters,realate to them, so somthing bad are alkward to them, is bad or alkward to me. This is something normally reserved for good books, so I am very proud of you, even though I don't know you at all, and have no right to be proud. This story is so good I was anixous to finish the chapter to write a review. And if you've ever written reviews(and I assume you have) you understrand writing reviews for even the best of storys is no joyride.

I enjoyed writing this review and I hope it provied helpful feedback. (I also apologize for spelling mistakes, which are numerous, I'm sure.)

Dragon Eva
vandiver49 chapter 3 . 6/22/2007
This story is great. I love the side conversations bewteen Cyborg and Robin as well as Raven's very pragmatic approach to her relationship with BB. Keep up the good work.
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