Reviews for Deadpan Love |
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titanfan45 chapter 15 . 2/10/2019 I hate to see the story end. I thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter. Thank you for all of your work to finish this very well written tale. |
YumeTakato chapter 15 . 2/10/2019 I enjoyed it, thank you~ |
GoodOldFaith chapter 15 . 2/10/2019 Thank you for fulfilling your word. Until next time. Ciao |
sam chapter 14 . 1/29/2019 this was so sweet and cute, really well handled! |
CommanderThaum chapter 14 . 1/27/2019 Alright. I had originally left a guest review as Commanderthaum late at night after reading this. It's morning now and I've had a lot to think about the story. First off I would like to say that this story was great. I haven't watched the Teen Titans show but this seemed like they were casted perfectly. I could envision everything that has happened to the characters. You really felt like you were there with the team as well as BB and Rae as their relationship progressed. I found it odd that Raven just states things like "for now baby and chick are off limits" but then again this is Raven so it's not that odd. Secondly I have two gripes about this. I felt like you could've made this story longer. 14 chapters just seemed too short unless this was an arc. To me it seemed that Gar and Rae's relationship progressed quite quickly from a kiss in the doorway to spending nights casually sleeping together to have sex on their getaway trip. I felt like you could've progressed their relationship more slowly and even spread it across more chapters. I don't know how else to describe it. Now my second gripe, I personally and morally disagree to Rae and Gar having sex and spending nights in Rae's room. But I'm not the author so I will continue to read this despite those two minor personal dislikes. Well, that's what I thought of the story. I hope you update soon or if this is just a book that you make the sequel soon. Keep up the good work man. |
CommanderThaum chapter 14 . 1/26/2019 Great story so far. I thought it moved a little fast but now that I've read all 14 chapters I don't think so. I morally don't agree with Gar and Rae having sex but whatever. Otherwise keep up the good work man and please update it soon with the next chapter. I'll be following this story. (I'm on my PC and have an FF account but forgot my password; I apologize for the anonymous review) |
Guest chapter 8 . 12/31/2018 ...what were the results? |
screamer chapter 10 . 11/23/2018 Ok yeah! This chapter was NOT here when i last read this fic. Wow. Im insanely happy. New content...wow. Love this |
screamer chapter 6 . 11/23/2018 STARFIRE I LOVE YOUU |
screamer chapter 4 . 11/22/2018 Ahhh. Ok! Their date went well... Starfire was so cute. This fic is so funny & entertaining. Very in character too! Love the tone |
screamer chapter 3 . 11/22/2018 Aahdhhdskjddldjdlld... Beast boy ! That was so funny & nerve wracking at the same time. Oof. I love their banter. So much chemistry ! |
screamer chapter 2 . 11/22/2018 Hello! Yeah im still screaming. The bantering is still just as good as i remember. Im still affected lmao. I love this fic goddammit. I actually didnt expect there to be 14 chapters ? I thought there were less. But im happy because that means that either u a.) Added more chapters since the last time i read this or b.) Had 14 chapters up originally but i dont remember so I get to experience it all over again & have a good time. Either way i win ! Woooooo |
screamer chapter 1 . 11/22/2018 Im screaming ! I remember reading this years ago & this is still as good as the other times i have read this. Ahhh. This was my childhood tf. I love/d how in character everyone is. And the pacing! And the humor! Wow. Im still shocked that i found this again after all these years |
Sanzojoe chapter 11 . 11/3/2018 “Rae and Gar are more important than Raven and Beast Boy” Boom you made that line even better. |
Sanzojoe chapter 10 . 11/3/2018 “That Raven and Beast Boy would make a Rae and Gar impossible” I really liked that line even if it was a sad one. |