|Reviews for Pity|
| ExtremeRainbowRaiderPrincess chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Fantastic story. _ Renji's lines were so cute, and the antics of the other two were great.
Keep up the amazing work! :D
| Nen1986 chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
Shuu and Kira have it rough dont they. Nice polt, and and eay to read. Thank god Renji was there!
| grilledjellyfish chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
XD that one was real sweet. Poor kiddies, drowning first their problems and then drowning (almost n.n) themselves. wonderful one-shot!
| alescA Munroe chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
Not my usual style of reading material, but it made me sad in a way only the best angst can. More soon, hm?
| Immortelle Stalker chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Waah~ Multiple attempts of drowning! x_X
I loved this fic. Just enough angst to make me see how they really grieved for their captains. Also, the descriptions and dialogues were perfect. Gawd, it really pulled me into reading more~
Wonderful job! It would have been great to see more ShuheixKira though, but that's alright. It's beautiful that way already. :)
| JupiterThunder247 chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
Oh, poor Kira, poor Shuuhei. I think I remember you telling me about this idea and how Renji hangs out with them as a kind of suicide watch. Nicely done. I really enjoyed the discriptions from when they were under water. Hot pressure, so lovely.