|Reviews for Something About Naruto|
| Tremor230 chapter 3 . 6/16/2013
You forgot the kiss scene! even if yaoi it could have been fun to have Naruto bolt out of the class in disgust and have the others assault Sasuke in rage for his "stealing" to beat him XD
by the way...are there any possibility for you to continue? even with smaller chapters? at least give it a thought, the story is awesome, I would like to see how Zabuza, Haku and Gato act near him...Hell! even Tazuna and family would be fun to watch as the fall victims of Naruto's charm XD
Please give it a thought, would you kindly?
| JAKdaRIPPER chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
damn i caught all of the references except for el hazard i havent watched that anime in forever, that and i never really liked it that much as for your fic i like it plez cont.
| Tetris Ex Machina chapter 3 . 10/7/2009
| Pickles and Cream chapter 3 . 7/28/2009
i like your stories(the one's I've read so far) , they have a happy feeling to them.
| garsdal chapter 3 . 5/28/2009
a fucked up naruto fan club the size of of a hidden village. (problery expanding whenever he leaves konoha.) this is DENTENED for greatness!
| gabe-clone chapter 3 . 4/22/2009
i like this story continue it or i shall use rubber cement to attach 50,0 barbie dolls to serfaces all around your house
| gabe-clone chapter 3 . 4/14/2009
please continue this story... i like it please. it you dont continue this story i shall sell your bike to pee wee hermon and feed your house to blood thirsty squirrels
| NarutosBrat chapter 2 . 12/19/2008
You know, I almost feel sorry for Hinata. If Naruto was able to send her into sudden bouts of blushing, stuttering, nad fainting, then she's liable to have a coronary now, either that, or finding herself creaming her pants in his presence.
I also think you should have slipped in an inner monologue for Sakura, or had her debating the merits of both Naruto and Sasuke with her Inner Persona. That it would be such a confusing conversation for her could have been funny.
I did find a couple places where you had words you didn't need and the wrong word used grammatically during the Kyuubi reflection, and his eyes are red. PM me if you want me to show you where, but I figure you just missed them during your editing process, and can easily find them with another read through.
Great plot, moving along nicely. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
| meringun chapter 3 . 10/4/2008
nice fiction. update soon
it will be interesting to see orochimary meet naruto
| LadySerenity0000 chapter 3 . 10/2/2008
lol! awsom story! can't wait t see the fan boys/girls kick the crap out muzuki! (insert evil laughter) lol!
| Da-Deranged-Dude chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
Hm... The guy with aliens is either Tenchi Muyo or To Love-Ru... The ten-year old was Negima... I can't figure out the rest. Tell me please!
| Ashynarr chapter 2 . 6/16/2008
update! pleasepleaseplease update! :'(
| I 3 ur story chapter 3 . 5/18/2008
OMG...just...RoFL. Kawaii Naruto-sama... I really like you're characterization and in my point of view nobody got to OOC even Mizuki..poor guy...xD Another well done fic, keep going Chronos Astral-san
Good luck and God Bless, hope you'll have the time to update
| Thumbellina Grande chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
that poor boy/girl/human...naruto:NOT A GIRL!
| Earthly Wind chapter 3 . 2/2/2008
Oh. Me likey ;] Update, yeah? X]