Reviews for Poison and Smut
Hinotama-Soul chapter 3 . 7/27/2013
This guy is crazy... god of love, huh? first I thought that it was hakkai, who came in at the first chapter but I guess that was wrong...
the end is unexpected and just great!
HoNk HoNk MuThErFuCkEr chapter 3 . 7/4/2012
I liked your story alot, bot goku fuckin gojyo was super akward. Over all i liked it. I hope u can do one on naruto. Sasuke as seme n narutp as uke. Thanx for the story.
gohagosa100 chapter 3 . 12/31/2011
oh my freakin god! u r awesum! just freakin awesum! i cant believe it! u hav got 2 make sumthn lyk this again! im beggin ya! please! a gokuxgojyo s so hot! can it b a hakkaixgoku nxt tym?
Sunshine-aki chapter 3 . 8/5/2011
well... that was amazing. ive never even heard of this, but now i may have to watch/read it now. this made me look up who they are and what they look like, and it looks interesting... and theyre hot. thats always nice, that way even if the show isnt that good, you still have something nice to look at. x) hahaha jk. but its really great as usual. :D
Oashisu chapter 3 . 2/8/2011
the ending was awesome but the rest of it was soooooooooooo hot.
Tobais Shaun chapter 3 . 9/28/2010
Lets see here..

-re reads, has to control a nosebleed-

Okay.. Okay. I'm cool now. I'm cool.

Do you know how fucking hot that story was? I mean seriously? I've read so many Saiyuki pairings and I've come to appreciate the most OBVIOUS pairings. (Please pity me..) Although this is the only good GojyoxGoku I have EVER read. There were a few spelling mistakes, but other than that I didn't notice anything off about your lovely descriptive skills. (God, so VERY descriptive) So good. SOOO GOOOOD.

-coughs and blushes-

Now, I'm sure you probably have stopped doing this.. (I hope not!) But I have an idea for the last chapter.

Lets say that they are at the bar.. or something like that, and Sanzo is being his normal bastardy self, whilst Hakkai is drinking. Somehow they find themselves in... In... In.. a drinking contest with some other guys (? -is kinda loopy) and it ends up being Hakkai and Sanzo who are left. The drinking continues until both of them are hammered and completely drunk (Yet again.. I don't know.. Randomness FTW! .)... Strip poker? Sorry! SORRY! Just fandom slipping out for a moment. Heh heh.

So yeah. Thats what I'm thinking. Drunk.. Or Strip poker in the bedroom.

Sorry for the less than helpful idea..

...

Keep up the good writing!
Optomistic Emo Kleptomaniac chapter 3 . 7/29/2010
Depends on whether its gunan be realistic or not?

XD

But i would love to give a few ideaas anyway this was soo cool

didnt mind the gokuxgojyo but preffered the gojyo goku X3
AkakoChiYuki chapter 3 . 7/23/2010
WOOOOWWW...for a guy, you make an awesome lemon. I can't find any good GojyoxGoku these days. Please add the bonus chapter soon.
azab chapter 3 . 7/2/2010
i loved it a lot
azab chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
i loved it a lot
azab chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
i loved it a lot
Maharl100 chapter 3 . 6/6/2010
I like the ending
shiro to kuro chapter 3 . 5/3/2010
i liked the story XD youre a good writer, but what i did not like was the "dirty talk" it kinda ruined it all
Draiq chapter 3 . 3/3/2010
O, so fantastic! Your lemons are freaking BRILLIANT!

But oh oh! I have a request for a bonus chapter! I wanna see Goku decide to take things into his own hands, and really give Gojyo something to think about! Like, be a total TOTAL dom!

Hm, that would be so fantastic! But even without that, I love this story! You really deserve more reviews than you've had.

Bravo!
Electra Raven chapter 3 . 8/13/2009
awesome job! it was sexy and really good to read! I would love to see the bonus chap! I have no idea for it, sorry! D: but hopefully you'll come up with something.

well,later and thanks for writing this!

~Electra
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