Reviews for Good Intentions
Watch2muchtv chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
You're right , this is a scene they should have ahd in the episode. It's a really good piece. I like how Cortes had to spell it out for Mahad that he didn't need to yell at Lena to speak to her like he does need to yell at Mahad. This was really really good.
MM Mel chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
Read it again...still love it... :D
Pocky Flavored Nerd chapter 1 . 8/4/2007

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Mel chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Cool! Fanfiction. Net added a Skyland category! (I've been waiting for them to do that!) Anyway, I liked this. It did seem as though something was missing from the episode...Cortes would never have let Mahad get away with that if his and Lena's roles were switched. Great job!
Blue-Inked Frost chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Wow! I thought this was really good, though you know I've never seen an ep. :P Good job of dealing with character consequences. It might have skirted close to character-bashing, but you made your case very solidly, and the circumstances seemed quite chilling. I liked your take on the sibling relationship, and the last line was especially good. Character development for Mahad and another chilling reflection!

Very nice fic. I really liked it.