Reviews for Strained Emotions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good! I hope Carlisle takes him down a few pegs. Jasper should have asked questions first, truly got what was going on BEFORE he attacked Edward . . . Boys! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would hate to see New MOon from Jasper's eyes. Angst all the way through! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Jess actually tried to sit next to the cullens? That took guts! And I love that they can now tease Edward about her. Hee hee |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story. Immediately intrigued to see Twilight from Jasper's POV, but right off the top of my head - It would seem to me that if Jasper feels he is that close, that they could just suggest he stay home and not attend school. I mean they live in the middle of nowhere, its not like anyone would know he was there. And Alice is seeming a little selfish. Anyway, on to chapter 2 |
![]() ![]() whatever you do just continue writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() really a nice story:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i luv this story! jasper is so awesome! i cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok, but i still can't wait to see what happens in the next chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great job. I defintaly thing the rewrite is much better! I can't wait for an update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! This DEFINATELY one of my new fave stories! I ABSOLUTELY love it! Jasper is my fave Twilight character and Alice is my second, so of course I love them together, and I love Bella and Edward, so this is just marvelous! You have REALLY got into Jasper's head! It's so delightful! I atually cried (may or may not have been cuz I'm just retardedly emotional)in the first chapter cuz Jasper wanted to leave and it was really hurting Alice. ;P LOL, but you have TRULY amazed me ;D |
![]() ![]() I love it it's amazing write more soon will enjoy and read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story is awesome! really update soon! I love your jasper's p.o.v. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, poor Edward and his conflicting emotions. I liked the line about seeing the lack of Edward's Volvo in the school parking lot. I thought it was funny. I hope that your day will be interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() welcome back! D im glad u started updating again! i love the new chapter n will be waiting anxiously for the next ones! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm... I am loving getting a glimpse inside Jazz's head. He is such a wonderful vampire... I almost named one of my fish after him. But then my mom insisted on naming it (the other three already had names I'd assigned... George (after a HP character), Edward, and Seth). I did talk her out of Norman though. Told her to pick a character from either Harry Potter or Twilight. Now he's Cedric. *grumbles about not having an Emmett or Jasper* Wow... I got a tad bit off subject there. lol Anyway, you're doing an amazing job with this story! Can't wait to read more! |