|Reviews for The fate that dooms us|
| AtticusLegend chapter 2 . 7/19/2007
This story is pretty good althoguh i'm unsure of whats going to happen next (well i guess thats a good thing in a way). The only thing you could work on is more details in the story and you could use qoutes " " in order to show people are talking. It's easier to read that way. Other than that its a pretty good story hopefully it's updated soon.