|Reviews for Solitaire|
| Kebrin chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Strange, yet filled with warm fuzzies that made me smile at the last line.
Even though it's over a year old, I'll go ahead and say it:
The breaks in the lines feel a bit awkward; I can see you're breaking it up into phrases, which make me wonder why "Is that this game can be comforting" isn't divided into two lines, except as an attempt to maintain the three line stanzas. Having one line so long feels out of place.
However, I absolutely love the concept! I love poetry that can comment on human nature. I think you've done a great job summing up why we'd play something as frustrating as Solitaire.
| rose chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
i really love this one too ]