|Reviews for The Oath of a Valkyrie|
| riilicious chapter 7 . 2/28/2008
please update... x.x
| Dani300 chapter 6 . 7/21/2007
Hey there! Here's a review.
Okay, your writing is pretty good and you have a solid plot (unlike me and my scribbles) but your grammar could use a little work. There's also a little problem with the present and past tense... Sorry if I sound like a really bad critic, I'm not very good at this, I guess.
| Devil Of The Sand chapter 6 . 7/18/2007
Hopefully Destin is alright! Leya pls save him! LeyaxDestin!
| TenkaTenshi chapter 6 . 7/15/2007
Found few spelling mistakes...
and rite is spelt wrong. The correct spelling should be right. (and I won't go for grammer check since I'm not good at grammer.)
But good job with this chapter! I like it alot!
| TenkaTenshi chapter 4 . 6/25/2007
Yay! Another chapter! I love the way that there's soo many plots in one single chapter! (and the way how every chapter is long!)(I'll try to get my friend to read this!)
| TenkaTenshi chapter 3 . 6/14/2007
Omg! Is Destins going to be ok?
and I really like the interact with Leya and Destins when he was dying.
| TenkaTenshi chapter 2 . 6/13/2007
Ooh...Cliffhanger...This story is getting really interesting!~Do continue
| TenkaTenshi chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
I wonder what happens next~update please! (adds to favourite)