|Reviews for Together|
| VampireBassist chapter 33 . 7/6
I have to say, this took me 3 days to finish reading.
And it is a well written story. Although there were some spelling errors,
I still think this story is good. The plot was well thought out.
One thing I definitely wanted to see was Ino witnessing SasuSaku moment.
So she can open her eyes to reality that "her" Sasuke-kun didn't choose her.
Plus I felt like I missed how all of rookie 9's suspicions were gone.
I mean, I only know of Neji, Shikamaru, Hinata, and I think TenTen's faded suspicions,
but what about the rest? Again, I wanted to see Ino's reaction to this all.
Anyway, great job with this fic. :)
| Law23 chapter 33 . 6/1
| Guest chapter 33 . 5/9
Wow, a great and interesting story. The past of sakura and sasuke really fits in the story. Thanks really for the story because I'm a solid fan of sasusaku since I was 8 years old ( I'm 14 now) KYAA! Some chapters are great *hotty part you know* and I read this story more than 3 times :)
| Priscilla chapter 1 . 4/23
I was unable to read further. The grammar is botched so horribly that it breaks up the meaning of the sentence. If English is not your first language then I apologize. If it is then I am
advising that you get a beta reader or proof reader to revise your chapters. Despite the grammar mistakes,the story doesn't seem to be horrible. Just drowning in minor mistakes that would irk the intelligent mind.
| theeuniverse chapter 33 . 2/19
Aaahhhh the feels! The ending is so fluffy. Anyway I love this fic! There were a few grammar errors and spelling check but still it's so cute. 3 keep writingmore sasusaku okay? :D
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/4
Lol he dropped his thing x3
| Imateenwolfluva chapter 27 . 1/19
WHAT THE HELL EIGHT CHILDREN R U KIDDING ME THATS SOOOOOO MUCH
EIGHT?! Wow seven sons and 1 daughter
How. About 4 sons and 4 daughters to make it even
Like my mum ... 2 sons and 2 daughters yup 4 children
BUT NOT EIGHT ! Ok nvrmind nice chptr btw :D
| Imateenwolfluva chapter 26 . 1/19
The mysterious person is Madara
| Trisha chapter 33 . 1/1
FANGIRL SHRIEKING AT THE EPILOGUE.
This was so cute. I saw a couple of references to your friend, animequeen100, fanfiction: To Love and To Love Again.
Sora and Suki. I saw a few other references. I was shocked in a good way about this. (Don't take this the wrong way. I'm not accusing you of plagiarism. Honest.)
I really liked your fanfiction.
| Sasusakufan001 chapter 33 . 8/1/2014
This fanfic is definitely a must to read if you love SASUSAKU
| Hinata'sMuse chapter 33 . 6/30/2014
One of my favorite SasuSaku stories and SasuSaku Writers!
| SasuSaku1996 chapter 25 . 3/17/2014
If I remember correctly Yamatos surname is Tenzou maybe you can put it in
| MagentaFeathers chapter 12 . 3/4/2014
Finally that bitch is dead. She was on my nerves XD Their engagement was indeed a bit fast, but o well, who am I to speak? :)
| MagentaFeathers chapter 11 . 3/3/2014
Stupid Yen, she's so annoying, but I also pity her in some way. I know as no other how it is to be rejected from the one you have a crush on.
| MagentaFeathers chapter 10 . 3/3/2014
I really loved it. Good chapter :)