Reviews for Broken Opportunities
SilverInkblot chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
I really can't see Sarge as a family man, but I love this nonetheless 3 It's a completely different take on their relationship, and it makes me rethink that trip to the "afterlife" Sarge took.
Follow-The-Firefly chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Interesting take on Sarge's hatred for Grif. _
Super Spy Ninja chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Aw, I really liked this. I love Grif, after Church, of course. Bravo!
ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 10/16/2008
That would actually make a lot of sense.

I wants to hug them both...

All the Reds actually.

All of the Blood Gulch characters.

Every single one of them has had it hard, in one way or the other.
Rastaban Bright chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
Kind of at a lack of things to say here, except that that was very well written and left me with my jaw hanging 3 feet below my feet...not comfortable I will say, but definitely commendable (:


The Mad Maiden chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
That was good, I like how you actually have a reason why Sarge hates Grif. Also smart, giving Sarge an actual name!
ButterflyxSoup chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Ah, I suppose this would then explain a lot. I like your take on things, and I hope you update soon.
Extraintrovert chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
"He needed to stop hoping for a decent unit. It was clear they didn’t exist"

Sarge's random hatred of Grif is fun and enjoyable, but life is rarely so clean cut, and this is an interesting, believable, and of course quite sad theory as to something we normally pay little attention to.
Ranger24 chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
that ... was ... odd.
Aseret Kitsune chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
Amazing story. I love how you had Grif remind Sarge of his son. This was an excellent read.