Reviews for Jedi Master Naruto
Guest chapter 3 . 1/2
Please never write fanfic toon ever again if you can't even write in simple paragraphs instead of writing it like a fucking play
Scheffelman chapter 7 . 8/1/2017
Will there be a sequel?
draco122 chapter 7 . 6/29/2017
that was awesome i loved it. A great story
PLEASE READ ME chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
... not everyone has the byakugan, or lv 3 sharingan, you would have to have a shit lode of Jedi or sith training to remote view or even to reliably view future events, or possible near future events the whole seeing naruto's chakra's thing is just a event in witch seem she is prodigal, which would not show up so early in her training. Its a WTF moment that just takes me out of the story, which is the writer's job, to do the opposite to make the reader become adsorbed in his or her writing.
Shiro chapter 4 . 5/4/2016
just to let you know, the speed of sound IS slower than the speed of light...

Sound moves at
340.29 m / s

Light moves at
299,792,458 m / s

m / s is metres a second :P
blackbelt256 chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
I'm going to be blunt: you NEED a beta reader. So many spelling and grammar mistakes, it's not even funny. Also, slow down. The story is hard to follow because you keep jumping around. The story should flow smoothly. Other than that, I thought this was pretty good, just needs a bit of work.
DARTH CAEDUS chapter 7 . 1/19/2016
Dragon0905 chapter 7 . 1/10/2016
Well. I liked the overall plot. I think it could use a little more fleshing out of some things. And just a tad more thought in the elemental power use. Like earth is weak to lightning. And Naruto used earth wall to stop an electric attack. But did he drop the wall go over it or run around it? Little things mostly but sometimes the little things add up to make a good story grand or if done improperly... Horrible. Hope this helps for future works.
yindragonkiba chapter 7 . 2/13/2015
Love it
firegate unleashed chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
You are an idiot its ANBU not ABNU and its hokage-sama, iruka-sensei not hokagesama or irukasensei
Kain129 chapter 7 . 6/19/2013
loved it plan to read your other stories soon
red neo ranger chapter 7 . 1/25/2013
Love it
shadowfang jutsu chapter 7 . 1/8/2013
it is a really good fic kind of sort but still a good fic
somebodY chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
weak minded fools?idiots?force lightning ?
sounds more like a sith than a jedi
Masamune24 chapter 7 . 8/9/2012
Good fic but a little short and moved a little too fast. It was a good read though.
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