Reviews for Be Careful What You Wish For
riri23 chapter 25 . 7/6/2014
this story is awsome definitely something I would read
mspstar97 chapter 24 . 8/24/2013
You know, this was one of the fics that got me into fanfiction years ago. I think that now that I have an account, I should pay homage to it. Brilliant job!
Guest chapter 24 . 8/4/2013
that was crazy
Inkognito chapter 5 . 9/26/2011
So, helpful criticism:

1) You overuse the expression: "Don't play dumb/stupid".

2) Regarding the sentence: "She waited for her mother to get out on the other side, but she never"- it doesn't feel right. Perhaps it should be "She waited for her mother to get out on the other side, but she never DID" instead...

3) "Shes" should be "she's", the " names" -"name's"...
Inkognito chapter 3 . 9/26/2011
A great chapter. (Just try not to write "theres" instead of "there's") Well done, the development of events grabs an attention. I can relate to Casey's feelings, but it was really harsh. Poor Derek!
Inkognito chapter 2 . 9/26/2011
I really liked the dialogue. It was very in character. Even though, there were some typing mistakes: you wrote "its" instead of "it's" and 'Im' instead of "I'm"...
Inkognito chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
An interesting beginning. Yeah, Derek can be such a pig sometimes!
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 25 . 8/20/2011
This story was so amazing. My face is covered in tears from when Derek had died. I cried so hard. And this is just a story.
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 13 . 8/20/2011
God, if I was Casey, I would stomp on Shane's foot with my stiletto and tell him my relationships were non of his bloody business.
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 12 . 8/20/2011
Oh, poor Derek, I just want to wrap him up in my arms and tell him it will be okay. Rejection sucks, especially when it comes to Derek Venturi.
ZenNoMai chapter 24 . 7/7/2011
Wow, My god you are an amazing writer. I thought I was good but you are amazing. I have to go to bed but I swear Im gonna read every one of your stories when I come home from work.
morallygreydesi chapter 25 . 4/10/2011
Perfect. Just perfect. I wonder what would happen of Derek "remembered" everything...
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 25 . 11/12/2010
Will do!
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 24 . 11/12/2010
OMG that was fantastic!

Tears of joy now!

Their reunion was amazing and I really liked Derek's reaction to Casey's 'craziness'.

Amazing writing and a wonderful plot. Casey definitely learned her lesson. WELL DONE!

One of my favs!
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 23 . 11/12/2010
It brought tears to my eyes. So sad for Casey.

Please let her wish work!
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