Yay! LoVely ending to a fabulous story :) Thanks for sharing!

Hey :) I know it's been forever, but this chapter seems to be out of order?
Regardless, I'm loving this and am excited to read the rest!

what a rollercoaster. great ending.

Loved it ! i stayed yesterday's night until 2 AM my eyes were all read and I couldn't finish it. But today YEAHHH ! Loved it, loved it.
Duncan being delusional AGGHHH i hated him in this story. And you were totally right, he was a lousy friend to Logan. I am glad that they ended up apart.
Also I like the way you presented the story in parallels in some chapters. I like to see both sides of the story. It hurt reading them apart and so lost in their lives. Great job ! Congrats.

Thank you, I really enjoyed this! This is one I know I'll come back to again and again. My favorite part was Logan and Veronica standing together in defense of their LoVe against Duncan. Fantastic characterizations all around. Great epilogue to show their life together and their children continuing the cycle. Well done.

Really awesome story. Thanks.

I can't tell you how many times I've read this, I keep coming back to it. I love how you've created this world of similarities between three generations. I especially love how you've written the story of Logan & Veronica, so beautiful. Thanks for this, thanks for giving them a happy ending. It's a beautiful story.

luv it! thank for the read.

Wow, sex with duncan seems...exactly how you'd think. ;)

Fantastic story!

What a beautiful story, very well written, you put me through the wringer with how well you let the emotion through, found this story last night and couldn't put it down it kept me interested throughout. The epilogue was a good way of settling the nerves after all the angst. Keep on writing.

A beautiful, well written story. LoVe forever xxx

Great story, I liked it!

I love your writing, it's lovely. As is this story, just lovely.

I only just found this story and wanted to congratulate you for some great writing here! It was very intense and emotional and I could not stop reading, wanting to know what was happening next... I think you got the characters spot on and being a future fic, I think it is fine to make them do things that may not be exactly in character when they were say 18/19 (that's when the show ended right?) but is believable five years later...

It took time and some very wrong relationships but I loved that you had L & V finally fight together for their relationship rather than fight one another. The 'Epilogue' was sweet showing them build a family together so thank you for the happy ending...

Love your current story 'The Return' and its fluffier tone... and glad you haven't stopped it...