|Reviews for Long Way Back|
| Mara-DragonMaster chapter 15 . 7/25/2009
So sorry it has taken me so long to read your update. A little boy who's first birthday is coming up in a few weeks takes up more time than a person would think; I don't have near the time I used to to read fanfiction!
Another wonderful chapter! I love the interaction between John and Elizabeth, and between Ronon and Teyla. I was a little surprised at John's reaction to the new couple's secrecy, and his threat to fire them– but it was only a surprise because he's usually so reserved and unaffected, not because it seemed out of character. I hope that Ronon can offer Teyla some comfort, so that she doesn't feel like both her boss and her lover are looking down on her.
By the way, SHIVER! What on earth is Ronon going to do to the prisoner? Yike!
God bless! Can't wait for the next update! :-)
| Bunnylass chapter 15 . 1/13/2009
Ugh, I wrote out this great review and my connection died *sobs*
First of all, please don't apologise for the wait :) It was well worth it to get to read this BRILLIANT 'tweaked' update! I absolutely loved it because it was PERFECT :D
I'm sure my heart was in my throat when I was reading Teyla, Ronon and Johns scene :( I felt so bad for the couple getting threatened with being removed from the team. It was so powerfully written when John was saying that.
But I could also see it from John's POV. And imagine how hurt he felt other than rightfully angry, at hearing the story. I just wanna hug all of 'em.
This was written so perfectly, its made me miss your stories even more, hehe. Thank you so much for updating! Hope you're okay :) Take care!
P.S. Fingers crossed this time works, lol :)
| Elfvamp1-13-97 chapter 15 . 1/12/2009
It's good to hear from you I had to re-read a bit but i don't mind. UPDATE soon!
| TubaPrincess chapter 15 . 1/12/2009
ooh.. another chapter! This adventure sounds exciting! Liz afraid of Ronon? I'm definitely interested in what he has in mind. Really, I don't think it would be too hard for her after how she reacted to his presence when they first met.. I'm looking forward to your next update :)
| Hannah554 chapter 15 . 1/12/2009
I loved this chapter, the interection between John and Elizabeth in the first scene was brillinat. The second scene, wow, I LOVED John in this scene, it was great to see the commander come out!
Now, what does Ronon have planned?
| Mara-DragonMaster chapter 14 . 3/25/2008
Wow! I am so glad I found this story– though I was a little confused at first what the 'mission' was, I didn't mind not figuring it out until later– it added to the secretiveness of Ronon and Teyla's quest. Which was threaded and woven masterfully, by the way. I was never bored! I loved how in character you kept them, and how they just naturally discovered what all of us fans already knew– that they were in love and belonged together. :-)
Loved it all! Waiting with baited breath for the next update!
| twogirlrevolution chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
one of my faves! good idea and awesome writing!
| Bunnylass chapter 14 . 2/28/2008
Wow, this was cool ; )
I would be seriously freaked out if i couldn't see, but Elizabeth handled it very well. You wrote her character perfectly. Well done.
The last part with Ronon and Teyla was so...adorable/sweet/cute/WICKED!
They're so great together and it ended the chapter perfectly : )
Thank you so much for the awesome update XD
| SpaceMonkey0941 chapter 14 . 2/27/2008
I am SO happy you updated this! And it's perfect, wonderful chapter, I loved the John/Elizabeth stuff at the beginning!
Keep it going, update again, (preferably sooner but it'd be hypocritical of me to ask for that), and I can't wait to see what happens next!
| Elfvamp1-13-97 chapter 14 . 2/27/2008
Yes it is working now and it is worth it. I world lov to see the reaction of the crew if they found them. lol. UPDATE SOON!
| TeylaFan chapter 14 . 2/27/2008
Woohoo! :D This update was great! :D I was momentarily (?) confused at the beginning, but I understand it now :D
Sweet that Teyla was waiting by Ronon's bedside for him to wake up! :) And I can just picture them laying there together in the infirmary :P
Thanks again for the dedication! Really sweet of you!
I enjoyed this chapter very much! Graag gedaan, and bedankt for updating! :)
| Hannah554 chapter 14 . 2/27/2008
I realy loved this chapter, John looking after Liz while she couldn't see was adorable. The scene with Ronon and Teyla at the end was cute too. Very worth the wait and looking forward to more.
| TubaPrincess chapter 13 . 2/10/2008
Oh my,...that was intense. What's happening with Major Lorne, et al? I'm glad Teyla and Ronon are back safely, that was a close call.
| Elfvamp1-13-97 chapter 13 . 1/4/2008
Thanks: sorry it took me so long 2 review internet's gone wacky
| SpaceMonkey0941 chapter 13 . 1/2/2008
*punches fist in air*
Okay you're forgiven. Great chapter. Keep them coming!