Reviews for The First Time
darklover chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
This was very beautiful. Very emotion filled. I loved it.
CurlyAkemy chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
This was so sweet and beautiful. There didn't need to be any smith details because the desire and passion were all there. Absolutly beautiful.
Mila-Renae chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Fluffy goodness :)
FemaleSpock chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
Wow, amazing! It's so romantic and funny in parts, great fic!
LEDlorien7 chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
Wow, this is great. All the elements of a perfect ficlet: the humor, the sex, the meaning, the amazing lines that sound really pretty. Great job. I love the beginning when the person is like "That's great but would you shut the fuck up?" that made me really happy! I love how it ended too. Very beautiful.
ACreativeThought chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
I loved it. i think my favorite was the last two lines...the last one more tho bcoz it was so...amazingly beautiful. And as weird as that sounds considering it was a line it was still so much thought into one little jumble of words you know? It was like everything said into a few small words. Just great!