|Reviews for Together: A Tale of Transformation and Tragedy|
| GeneralStargate chapter 13 . 5/12
What the hell... this story is distubing on so many levels u can't even begin. Good story just really gives me chills thinking about the shit that happened to ranma
| xThomas2 chapter 4 . 1/20
Not justified IMO. Whatever?..
| xThomas2 chapter 3 . 1/20
... you'd think with all the other stuff going on that tomoko's curse would run into interference.
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/16
Even if theirs simply no bringing Ranma back, and I dont want him back being honest I prefer Ranko...
But even then Ryouga could find out about Tomoko hunt her down and slay her would be catharatic.
| wrAith-19 chapter 14 . 1/5
The sad ending is reminiscent of a cautionary tale
| The destroyer of fate chapter 3 . 7/22/2014
good story so far going to leave off reading it at this point for now , the writing and story is great, enjoy it , but when I read this I just get this irritating feeling, the reason is basicly because of the curse, I just sympathise with ranma even though he doesn't know, mainly because of what she said "you have caused many women un happiness" or w.e , I just tend to get irritated when that kind of stuff happens I mean, hes been through plenty of shiz, his fiances are quite big causes for them, and most people don't are how he feels or how bad he has it. so adding this kind of thing to it just to make him unhappy is irritating to me I guess I feel like this is cus I "feel" for ranma, even though I have said all that I will most likely carry on reading it ;p just not all at once prob ;p still good story and well written.
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/16/2014
I can just see this
10 years have passed since Ranma died and Ranko took his place and just after Ranma & Ukyo's tenth birthday had passed Saffron arrived in Nerima & in that battle the entire NWC fought him and Kimma and it was during that that
Ukyo received a concussion and a broken leg, Akane was paralyzed from the waste down, Shampoo lost one arm & partial use of the other, Mousse received burns (think Deathlock in Agents of SHIELD)
however it was when Saffron killed Ranko that the battle ended as
Ranma & Ukyo Hibiki combined there Perfect Shishi Hokodans with there father's killing Saffron
Meanwhile Tomoko was at a bar in Asgard visiting her friend Loki when two figures walked in and upto her
"Yeah who wants to know"
"Ranma" one said as he removed his cloak "Ranko" said the other as she removed his cloak "& we owe you for what you did to us" they cracked their knuckles
"What you can't be here"
"Oh yes, we can"
"You see you made like Kasumi which mean I gave up the art so when Saffron came for a rematch I died"
"& I was freed from our soul, so Kami-sama made us God & Goddess as an apology for not stopping you"
| notriddle chapter 14 . 4/16/2014
For everyone who complains that no one dies at the end: you forgot Ramna. :-)
| Ritsuko-chan chapter 14 . 8/15/2013
I've had just finished to read your story (one of the rare good fic in this fandom) and all I can say it's that it's well-written and interesting, I really loved it! And your alternative set-up was really funny to read xD
Anyway, thanks again and good luck for the future! :)
| Clare chapter 14 . 2/20/2013
Indeed, definitely a tragedy. Up until chapter 9 I almost expected a happy ending, especially with the title of the Epilogue. Nope, turns out everything fell apart into ruins at the end.
I can't really stomach tragedies too well. I'm as depressed as Ryoga (well, not when he's REALLY depressed), so sad stories like this make it hard to finish and still be able to sleep calmly. But I have to say, this was well written and done pretty well.
The omake was amazing, definitely helped cheer my mood up a little after reading it. I even wish it was expanded a few more pages. Nothing serious of course, but that line "if you got me pregnant..." is genius.
Finally, I wonder what a future event in which everybody meets the normal Ranma again. Perhaps the curse rebounds and slowly changes Ranko into Ranma again (stuck in a female body, could be interesting in itself). Or maybe they end up in an afterlife, in which Ranma and Ranko both exist. I would imagine Ranma would react in much the same way he did in the Omake :P
| T. Alana M chapter 14 . 1/31/2013
It's a great story... but I like the three-page version better... It's less angsty. :(
| Zhor chapter 14 . 12/5/2012
Ah, so was Ranko actually brainwashed by the curse? Hm.
| Zhor chapter 12 . 12/5/2012
...Eh. Why does everyone treat Ranma as is he/she is completely dead and replaced? The consciousness and sense of self is still the same, Ranko just made choices that the curse nudged along, finding that she preferred living as a female. The double-curse with the water just made the body fully female aong with it's chi/energy, but the soul is still the same. The gender changed from a magic to reality, but the curse at the story's beginning just caused events to lead to a conclusion...Ranko is still Ranma, I'd think. The whole situation is kind of sad, really.
| Zhor chapter 11 . 12/5/2012
Hmm, very good so far...On I read.
| Inara Seraph chapter 13 . 9/26/2012
Wonderful fanon deconstruction.