*GACK* *COUGH* *BLERGH* *UGH*

Ahem. Sorry. *cough* *cough* It's just, SO MUCH MUSH! The touchy-feely Snape is the complete opposite of the way you portrayed his character earlier, and his relationship with Harry SHOULD NOT CHANGE THAT FAST. Snape is a greasy git! Emphasis on greasy! Harry is NOT eager to get all huggy-bear with him! Snape does NOT use words like "you beautiful, brilliant child of mine"... *GACK*. And Harry, while not as much of a moody broody dude as he was earlier and is in canon... HE'S STILL A GUY! He isn't even in touch with his feelings about Hermione, so he is a million light-years away from even THINKING about the terms "felt complete" or "cherish".

Harry and Snape both had abusive and nasty childhoods: the one thing they have in common is that they are uncomfortable with physical contact! This whole episode might actually be believable if you just take away the hand-holding and hugging, leave everything else the same, and put in some awkwardness about, y'know, touching.

I apologize for the rant. I will shut up now and read the rest of your story, which has, except for this point, been fairly well-written and interesting.

XOXO, Stone Elbow :-P

Sorry that I didn't review to all of the chapters but I just had to read straight through. I LOVED this entire story but especially this last chapter. It was AWESOME. This is one of my all time favorite stories now. Glad I found it.

Great story, well written

Amazing! And that means a lot coming from me; I am extremely critical and biased towards Light/Grey HP fanfics.

Meant to ask in the last chapter. But, if Harry is in charge of Grimmauld Place then how is the Order still able to use it? Wouldn't they be kicked out of it until Harry let them back in? Great story so far. Looking forward to reading the rest of it.

Why is it that supposedly intelligent people don't realise that Ireland is not part of Britain! Ireland was once ruled by Britain through tyranny, creating many horrors such as the Great Famine when one third of the population died from starvation while Ireland continued to export food and British landlords watched in some comfort from from their luxurious mansions.
Here is some basic geography: there are two island's Ireland and Britain. Britain includes Scotland Wales and England (note not Ireland).
Sometimes the island's are referred to as the British Isles, but this is politically and geographically incorrect, it was correct only when Britain had dominion overbireland, which has not been true now for a century!

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FABULOUS I LOVED IT it was great to see all the people like Dumbledore, Ron and Ginny, etc in another light and all the Slytherins going over to Harry's side! AMAZING KEEP WRITING xxx

had to comment this was so good ! Thanks :):):)

I think that turning Voldemort into a ghost and having him hang around Harry and his family was a very cool idea

great story

I'd like to point out that Remus does not care as much as he thinks he does. If he had, wolf or not, he would have fought for the last remaining member of his 'pack'. the wolf would have been protective of its cub... no Remus cared about his friends and cares about himself but Harry is only his friends son, nothing more to him. That he pretended otherwise is his human failing really.

Lovely story. I enjoyed seeing your character development and the growing relationship between Harry, Sev, and the gang. Very realistic. Thanks for sharing.

I have a vague feeling I have read this but... oh well read it again! :D

Love your story️️️️️
Especially the Dursleys punishment