BRILLIANT STORY!
WELL DONE

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Very little I can say beyond ‘Spectacular Story’.

My life was enriched by reading it. Thank you.

TGM

Fantastic chapter. I am glad H&H finally kissed!

The thoughts of the Weasleys, particularly the turncoat three was quite well done.

As for the duel, you were imaginative and it worked. Harry didn’t defeat Voldemort and didn’t kill him. Rather, Harry VANQUISHED Tom, once for all.

Now we wrap up the pieces and I assume reconstruction will begin Hopefully, H&H will deepen their relationship.

TGM

Arran and Rhiannon are delicious OCs. I look forward to getting deeper into this.

TGM

Adding Hermione to the mix is BIG! Her reaction to the first Floo call was vastly amusing.

This works now, the proof will come when they return to Hogwarts.

TGM

I truly admire the depth and richness of your first eight chapters While Harry and Hermione are what they are in canon, only more, Snape and McGonagall are practically OCs.

I have to think that Harry has had something break free in his magic, I fancy that a lot of the rest of the Summer will be spent with Snape and Mcgonagall teaching him how to use this new power fluently and constructively.

H&H have allies now, remains to be seen if they have any true friends among their peers. Neville and Luna almost certainly but beyond that?

TGM

Well fuck. Another moronically wealthy Harry. A trust vault, to cover his education/teen years, worth 100 MILLION POUNDS! What the fuck are the fees at Hogwarts? Then in the Potter vault 20 Billion Galleons. About 100 Billion pounds. There are many, many countries that aren't that rich. Truly, this author is a fucking idiot.

I give up. The dialogue is moronic and everybody speaks exactly the same. Since when does a mother of seven express themselves in the same way as a 100year old wizard who expresses themself in the same way as a fifteen year old stressed out boy? The whole thing is inane.

Amazing story. Loved the part where you made Voldemort still be immortal, even if it's by being a ghost.

I enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing!

I call bullshit on this chapter. In third year harry kicked asses of 100 dementors and send them crying for mommy and that was with his power blocks on. Now free of it he barely push back a handful.

The plothole is so big that Godzilla can nest in it.

All Dracos kids married all Harrys kids.

The Greengrass's are not Deatheaters! Daphne is a good witch like her sister and Mother and Father.

Sirius never died in the veil he was unconsious not dead when he went thru.

Not a password as a password is one word. It was a pass phrase more than one word.