Reviews for Harry Potter and the Order of the Light and Dark |
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![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoyed this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AB-SO-LUTELY LOVED THE STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this story is certainly off to a most convoluted start. Poor Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely amazing, fabulous story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best way to kill Voldie. Stripped of magic, Allie’s, and hope |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fascinating escape plan. It was like a POW film |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh,nthis sucks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Clever plans by clever people Too bad there are no time turners |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can see the bond between them. Let’s see if hey can heal with he time left |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great scene with Minerva. Snape changes seem extraordinary, but not when viewed in context. Ok, I like the story. But long reviews won’t work tonight |
![]() ![]() ![]() No, Hermione needs to leave. How could they be so naive about portions. But, Harrywas smart |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, he got lucky there. No one scanned his purchases. The trunk must be powerful. But he needs torun |
![]() ![]() ![]() Get ready to run, Harry Hermione is being an idiot about Ron. I will blame potions |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cruel but believable. Don’t feel great Dobby No, it’s not “cheating” to involve elves and goblins. Why should Harry go through endless punishment. It’s not even good SM after a awhile. Plus, there is no safe word |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this was an interesting piece. Though I didn't understand why some things were so different from canon other than this was perhaps written before it became canon. Also there were tons of typos and oddly worded phrases. I'm going to guess that either you were very young while writing this or English isn't your first language. Unfortunately there were also issues with how the story flowed from time to time and felt a bit choppy. I'm not sure how else to explain it. At any rate, I liked the idea of Harry forming his own side and essentially taking on everyone. I do wish there had been more world building and explanations about Harry's magical training. I know Harry had around a year to learn and improve, but it still felt like he was suddenly awesome since most of that was glossed over. |