really enjoyed this story!

AB-SO-LUTELY LOVED THE STORY!

Well, this story is certainly off to a most convoluted start. Poor Harry.

Absolutely amazing, fabulous story!

Best way to kill Voldie. Stripped of magic, Allie’s, and hope

Fascinating escape plan. It was like a POW film

Oh,nthis sucks

Clever plans by clever people

Too bad there are no time turners

I can see the bond between them.

Let’s see if hey can heal with he time left

Great scene with Minerva.

Snape changes seem extraordinary, but not when viewed in context.

Ok, I like the story. But long reviews won’t work tonight

No, Hermione needs to leave. How could they be so naive about portions.

But, Harrywas smart

Oh, he got lucky there. No one scanned his purchases. The trunk must be powerful.

But he needs torun

Get ready to run, Harry

Hermione is being an idiot about Ron. I will blame potions

Cruel but believable.

Don’t feel great Dobby

No, it’s not “cheating” to involve elves and goblins. Why should Harry go through endless punishment. It’s not even good SM after a awhile. Plus, there is no safe word

Well this was an interesting piece. Though I didn't understand why some things were so different from canon other than this was perhaps written before it became canon. Also there were tons of typos and oddly worded phrases. I'm going to guess that either you were very young while writing this or English isn't your first language. Unfortunately there were also issues with how the story flowed from time to time and felt a bit choppy. I'm not sure how else to explain it. At any rate, I liked the idea of Harry forming his own side and essentially taking on everyone. I do wish there had been more world building and explanations about Harry's magical training. I know Harry had around a year to learn and improve, but it still felt like he was suddenly awesome since most of that was glossed over.