|Reviews for Operator|
| ChronoMitsurugi chapter 3 . 11/22/2010
Its very good, hell this would make one hell of a movie. Love the darker theme. Humor is still my favorite, but soldier themes like starshiptroopers or this, are always a great read. I like this story alot, like Haku and Hana, so no problems with the pairings, the squad and the commander are all great, but, I just cant seem to want to continue reading this right now, maybe later. Its just like starship troopers, fucking awesome but you need to be in the mood for it. only downside, Naruto's age, I would say make him the same as Haku, 15, at least, then make hana no older then 20 and this could work out great. Also, would have been beyond perfect if my favorite, Anko-chan, was the commander. but that's just me.
| Belle Mort 13 chapter 10 . 11/5/2010
... I just read this entire fic in one sitting
I Worship you
this is the best Naruto fic I have read in ages
this entire plot is awesome
this is a fantastic story
its well writen
well set out
has wonderful and engaging characters
and it is a pleasure to read
please continue writing this
The arival of Saya back into the story was interesting will we finnd out how she can walk soon?
| Kwisatz Haderach chapter 4 . 10/10/2010
Your character building could do with a bit of work. So far, it's very confusing to read.
| Leaprechaun1 chapter 10 . 10/8/2010
Please update this story again it is very good!
| erik chapter 10 . 9/30/2010
Cracking good story with some interesting reworkings of canon.
| Goldrune09 chapter 10 . 9/12/2010
odd. but at the same time its a refreshing look at a semiinew naruto theme. nice story.
| Doom Marine 54 chapter 3 . 8/26/2010
I'm going to be blunt, since I don't pull punches. The notion of letting anyone bellow Jounin is quite frankly, one of the most retarded ideas i've ever heard of. ANBU are the elite of the elite, as you said they're going to go on the most grueling missions, so I doubt they'd be sending some greenhorn chunin. They'd be sending their best IE jounins.
| Doom Marine 54 chapter 2 . 8/25/2010
So instead of the Naruto 'learning how to be human', 'regaining humanity' tropes we usually find in ANBU fanfiction. We get the 'bloodthirsty, cold, nonchalant, "badass" Naruto instead. *Yawn* Isn't that cute.
| Sir Omega chapter 10 . 8/9/2010
Damn. Potentially one of the best fics by a great author left unfinished. The world is just not fair.
If you pick it up again I'll give you a cookie!
| HolyKnight5 chapter 10 . 5/30/2010
Hey...when we're going to meet the "Greatest Shame of the Yamanaka Clan"...aka their version of Dr Hannibal Lecter?
| DOOOOOOM Lord of Waffles chapter 10 . 5/8/2010
this is a strange and yet awesome story and normally this many ocs piss me of but you use them beautifully. keep it up
| Omgoth chapter 10 . 3/30/2010
You are awesome, this story is epic, and if you finish this story I will die happily. Seriously, you have a gift.
| Discordia19 chapter 2 . 3/26/2010
I like this story a great deal. I'm interested in seeing where it's headed. Would you kindly update soon?
| Nemrut chapter 10 . 1/23/2010
It is an interesting story only I don't understand why you picked Hana of all people to be that close to Naruto. kakashi seems interesting but we haven't got enough information on hi to see if Naruto's hatred is justified or miss-placed. I like Kakashi, he is one of my favorite characters and I love reading about him from different point of views, such as yours, only that he barely is mentioned and if than heavily negatively.
I hope your next chapter will shed more light into this.
| Thoughts13 chapter 10 . 1/18/2010
This is absolute brilliance. THere's so much to say, but I can't even put it into words. All that I can say is that I'm really impressed with this fic. Your tone, style of writing, everything. The plot as well. There's so much going on, so many twists and turns, it makes most other fics look strictly linear in comparison.
Just a work of art!