wow this is so touching i want to cry...

wow this is cool...! i like chapter 4 the most

I love this chapter the most. It's kind of bittersweet...but sweet nonetheless...

Short but sharp. Full of emotions. Good job :) thanks

Beautiful!

This story made me cry! I loved it~

These are beautiful, bittersweet and very poignant. My favorites are the first chapter and the fourth. Having some one leave that was very much entertwined in you life like that would have a profound effect on a person , I think. Are ayou going to continue these one shots? This is very well done!

Allright...

I read all of the OneShots you collected here. I have to admit, that I don't like most of them (I REALY don't belive, that there ist love between Hikaru and Akira. There is much, but no love) but three were quite interesting.

"Hikaru no longer swims" is the first. The idea, that Sai might has been worried for Hikaru, when he was near deep water had never occourd me bevore, but it makes sense.

"Who broke your heart" is also interesting, since we find out more about some thoughts of Hikaru and Akari. The way you told this somehow touches me.

Last but not least: "pieces of you"

It reminds me of a story I read some days ago and I wonder, why Hikaru never realy showes Sai, but somehow it makes sense. He was the only one who was able to see him, after all.

I like the art one the best, i think. Especially the ending to it. But this one, with Akari and Touya confessing, it's sort of sweet and sort of sad at the same time. I like it a lot. Great job! Keep up the good work...

Well, I must say all these little snippets have felt rather bittersweet.

Thanks for sharing.

amazingly sad and beautiful

A very poignant tale of love and loss; a loss that could never be found, nor replaced. Chapte are my personal for the nice read.

wow im going to review for all the chapters...they are SO good thank you for useing your exellent mind to make such a work or art xD

Aw I really REALLY love this chapter! For some reason, I've always been hooked onto the idea of Hikaru taking an interest in drawing, and he always always draws Sai, because Sai is his everything. *sighs* I love this chapter...

Update soon! _

*sobs* that is so sad... I can feel my eyes tearing up already! *sighs*