|Reviews for He touches me|
| InkedBaby chapter 1 . 2/2
This was amazing. I can't even deal with the perfection!
I want to read whatever book it's based off too!
| FalconLux chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Hm. Very interesting. I kind of made me want to cry a little bit, but I'm going to go ahead and extrapolate this one in my head. Here goes:
The war eventually plays out similarly to before. Draco is cleared of all charges at trial in the aftermath thanks to Harry's testimony. The wizarding world is left reeling shortly after when the former death eater and the Savior announce their engagement. While Lucius wastes away in Azkaban for his crimes, Narcissa relishes Harry's ability to bring prestige back into their family, and over time, comes to like him as a person and value him as a son. Hermione embraces their union, and the Weasleys also come around eventually. Harry and Draco adopt several children, war orphans, naturally. (Sorry, I don't do Mpreg). And they all live happily ever after.
There. Now I feel better. Please excuse my eccentricity, but I love a happy ending, and yours just left too much for Fate's cruel hand to destroy. :-(
| EmeraldEyes01 chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
Although I really love this story and I've added it to my favorites, I still can't help but think that Hermione is too nosy for her own good. However, the meaning behind the story and your heart-breaking romance between Harry and Draco was so powerful! It dims the point that Hermione invaded Harry's privacy and couldn't leave well enough alone. I'm glad that she has a moment to comtemplate the forces drawing Harry and Draco together, but I wish that maybe she'd been a bit more hesitant about reading Harry's diary and repentant about finding out Harry's secret...maybe even just a little reluctantly repentant if that makes any sense. I really do love this fic, but Hermione's smugness of solving the code and being part of the secret is irritating. Admittingly, Hermione always kinda annoyed me in the books so I shouldn't complain when she stays in character. Ah well, I'll just imagine what hexes Harry will use when he discovers that his trunk has been messed with. Thank you for writing this story!
| ELDar chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
Ahh lo amo! amo este cuento xD es tan hermoso. me encantaron los poemas que usaste. hay unas frases que me dieron escalofríos. lo que mas me gusto es que sentí desesperación por lo entrometida que es Hermione pero cuando ella tiene esa súbita revelación me dio muchísimo cariño (sigue siendo una insoportable entrometida pero sutil v ) y la verdad que el ambiente de la guerra en hogwarts no me pareció nunca mas triste y bello retratado que en esta historia tuya ... mil gracias lo adore realmente x)
| Tortured Wings chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
I really enjoyed this :)
| AngelHeartOfMine chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Beautiful! I loved it )
| Emerald Dragon77 chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
This is just plain beautiful
| mairbear chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
that was pretty original ;o kudos for a lovely story :D
| Nenne chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
That was beautiful.
| vodoodollz chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
That was adorable. You had me on a rollercoaster ride throughout the whole thing. One moment I'm angsty with Hermione, next I'm annoyed with her, then pissed, excited, shamed, awed and smiling. Wow, it took me a bit to settle down after. Thanks - you have a way with words. I hope to read more of your work.
| c-h-l-o-e77 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
love it. i lke the mystery and how the page numbers have a message it's different.
| GoldenMassacre chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
This story was fantastic! It was original and compelling. I especially enjoyed the line:
‘Our energy could light the stars above us.'
It was the perfect line to use to allow Hermione to be able to figure out that Harry was in the astronomy tower.
I also enjoyed the ending greatly. Awesome job!
| beautiful fire warrior chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
loved!1 ur story it wasso original and the trick with the quidditch book was pretty clever. one thing though i dont like that she snooped around in his stuff, i mean if he really wanted her to kno he would tell her right and everyone has secrets from their best friends rite? i'm not bashing but i was just wondering if you had the same feeling when riting this story. shermione doesnt have to kno everything rite though i understand her fellings . well, good riting and pleze continue!
| thelonelyotakugirl chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
the annoying part of story was nosy Hermoine. Other parts it was pretty wicked.
| NelliGirl chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
interesting. I enjoyed it.