|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Power of the Past|
| Corneliusduke chapter 47 . 4/24
I found your story to be a little confusing. Way too much drama, for me, although you did complete your story (sort of). I like "Driftwoods", type of stories (although I'd like them to be completed). Yours seems to go off in strange directions too much. I'd like more of these to be after the war (With Tonks, Fleur, or Hermione). I do like Harry being as smart as Hermione (or smarter) that was right on. I like him being in Ravenclaw, and I also like Ron cast off like so much rubble. I do read a lot, and I read about Harry for a bit of light reading (check my profile). I don't like coming off as too negative. Keep at it and at least you completed it.
| Guest chapter 39 . 3/29
You have literally said that the story ends in 3 chapters roughy every other chapter for about 8 chapters now.
| LifeBeyondTheVeil chapter 1 . 1/14
Solid first chapter with plenty of hooks with all the favorite characters
| tanzar81 chapter 14 . 11/29/2016
I hope you giving use everyone's blood status actually pertains to your fic. Because otherwise i don't really care who has what blood...
All in all pretty good fic so far. Thank you for sharing.
| Spazzman29 chapter 41 . 10/9/2016
You made it blatantly obvious that Theodore was Kylie, I'm not sure why you didn't reveal it for so long. I knew it from the very start.
| Spazzman29 chapter 2 . 10/8/2016
So other than quidditch Harry has none of his achievements?
| Yaw613 chapter 47 . 10/1/2016
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
| elgreco93 chapter 3 . 7/30/2016
| Octavius6 chapter 47 . 7/6/2016
Will there ever be any up dates to this story?
| NatNicole chapter 47 . 1/15/2016
I love everything about this story!
| NatNicole chapter 2 . 1/15/2016
Eh, I like my crazy theories better.
Awesome chapter, though.
| NatNicole chapter 1 . 1/15/2016
Seems like a cool fic. My mind is already running amok with a mental prequel.
| OriksGaming chapter 2 . 7/5/2015
The romance here is terrible and completely contrived. Harry would most likely get tired of fangirls after a very short time and definitely not ask out a random fangirl he found wandering, no matter how good she looked. Seriously... The story is poorly written so far, and has an extremely rushed and pointless romance...
| DylanL chapter 43 . 12/3/2014
I have read all the story to this chapter and i have to say it was fantastic. I think Tonks losing the baby was in everyone's best interest as it would have created some serious problems between harry and her as her pregnancy progressed because she would have reduced maneuverability and he would want her out of the fight, so I think it is good she miscarried that one. I would have liked a chapter at the beginning to explain how you got to the point you were at when you started, alot like how you did the epilogue chapter, instead of alluding to things he did, during the story. Also the title is kinda confusing, I thought it was going to be a time travel story, especially with how you have your summary worded. I also think you should have stopped this story after the epilogue, I felt that chapter ended very well for a story conclusion and it wrapped almost everything up so the sequel would be an optional read, which i like, especially when the sequel has yet to be started or is incomplete. This chapter feels more like a beginning for a new story and the Christmas chapters would go perfectly with that, so I feel you should take them out and re post them in their own story labeled as a sequel for this one, instead of having it continued here like you do now. I really like your portrayal of harry as a powerful wizard who has a dark side he needs to suppress, I felt that given canon harry's history, that was a much better portrayal than the one JK did but then again there are a lot of other changes to you harry prior to him starting Hogwarts in your story, so that could have contributed to the differences. I am looking forward to reading your next story, but I only read completed stories so hurry up and finish it, also see if you can cut the chapters down a bit, if i was reading the story as you posted chapters I would like the long chaps, but when reading a completed story I prefer shorter chapters, like around 3k-5k words each.
| Darkened Void chapter 46 . 5/21/2014
I received your reply to my review of WOH. I was pretty close to finishing this story so I decided to wait until I finished and reply in the form of another review.
Really the most noticeable errors I caught were misspelled words, misused words and grammatical errors, but they were far from the worst that I've seen. If it were bad I would have stopped after about five chapters no matter how good the storyline was. Really limits what I can stand to read on this site. After reading this story I can see that you are improving the more you write, so kudos to you, man!
This story was another excellent example of great writing with an original plot. I saw sooooo many references to lines or scenes in the book and I loved it. It is rare when an author can make an AU that still gives shout outs to the book and make it work well with the story. I sincerely look forward to reading the sequel, which I assume you will work on after WOH is complete. Thank you for taking the time to write this. It has given me countless hours of enjoyment while I am bored at work or at home.