|Reviews for The Invitation|
| Saiyura chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
i loved the twist at the end. i hope to read other humorous stuff from you.
| Neko-chan chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
the was totally funny, poor Naruto having that kind of dream about Shikamaru, i guess the sour thing is all to blame, -_-; so he the invitation was also part of the dream, i can totally picture Shikamaru wearing the pink apron and blushing -