Reviews for Snow in Forks
twilight-jemmett chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
:-D
mydirt09 chapter 1 . 5/17/2008
Dirty little vampires
vampirechick123 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008
hahaha loved it. it was an adorable oneshot. loved it.

that was cute.
laneykin chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
Lmao that is hilarious!

I love it so much espically the part when Edward shows up!
Freesia Like Heroin chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
"I'm wet now."

Jasper's eye's popped open while Alice flinched from the surprise and shock she felt coming from him. Emmett's laughter boomed out across the crowd of students.

"That's terribly disgusting, Jasper. Please refrain from thinking of my sister that way."

'Then stop reading my thoughts or you're REALLY not going to like it next time-"

Edward smirked at him as he showed up behind Emmett.

I'm confused about that whole part! Could you please explain for me? This is incredibly good! I loved it!
Word Nazi chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
Lol, that was really good! I loved it! .
hanajimawashere chapter 1 . 7/5/2007
hah that was great!

julia
time can take its toll chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
A friend recommended this, said it was cute. And it really is. :3

I love the way the characters joke around, it's awesome. And funny. And um. Yeah. :D

The only bit of criticism I have to offer - fellow doesn't really seem like an Edward word. I know he's got that whole old-fashioned speech complex, but fellow? I don't know. Your call on whether or not to use an alternative.

Thiiss, is going into my faves. :D
bent05 chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
haha s00 funny!

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Lora-Lai chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
This made me giggle.

I totally wrote a fic like this once.

'Cept it wasn't as good.

And it was angsty.

But yours clearly owns mine.
sunlitstar chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
Funny! I like pre-Twilight stuff, and yours was especially interesting.
ForeverTopaz303 chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
OH I LUV IT! That was so cute! I've never read a story about that before. Very original!