Reviews for Babylawn: Shadow
Ciel the Hedgehog chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Cuteness! Personally, I think Shadow's a bit too angry for a three year old. A bit older, I couldn understand, but not three. For someone that young, I'd think the memory would scar itself over, and he wouldn't remember. Then again, that's just me.

There's also a few parts where you use "there" instead of "their," but that's a common mistake. Anyway, the story was cute! Nice job.
ribbonreverse chapter 1 . 6/16/2007
Good job! I'm too lazy to review all of the stories 'cuz I forgot to check the Sonic list for a week or two. *nervous grin* Anyways, this was awesome!

And you CAN see SonAmy in this one if you squint at it...

Good job! Keep on writing!

-Nikki
QueenOfFanFicWorldLoveGunner chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
aw shady-dowy is trying to be emo

it just makes him so much cuter

like all the other ones...I LOVE IT

THEY ALL ROCK

THE BEST BABY SONIC FICS I HAVE READ!
RikkuMcClowFox chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
So cute! I know I've said that a hundred times now, but it is! It wasn't far fromt the game at all! Keep up the good work!